LittleRedsWolf
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LittleRedsWolf15hCommentedCh 50 Chapter 18: Inspections, Accusations and Rescues!- LittleRedsWolf15hCommented[World Token: Fallout] (Rare)
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"Be that as it may, practice your more normal spells first. Youi have enough ways to strike terror into the hearts of mages." She requested and I rolled my eyes. - LittleRedsWolf1dCommentedIt seemed like she had to use the old method. She hadn't wanted to use it until now because she didn't want Daniel to think she was weird. She had already confessed to spying on him once; doing it again might give him the wrong impression of her.
- LittleRedsWolf1dCommentedThe raccoon's cries formed a grim symphony that seemed to resonate with the High Evolutionary's sense of purpose. To him, this was not just necessary but a gratifying step towards the culmination of his evolutionary ideals, a sacrifice at the altar of progress and perfection.
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You're doing well. Keep at it.
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Nothing to apologize for, you're doing well.
Chapter 2.Lich - LittleRedsWolf2dReplied to Sicklil
He needs to..
Attribute Points: 3 - LittleRedsWolf2dCommented
3-4 what?
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[New special type of knowledge accquired:Magic and Mana,Holy Energy,Undead Energy] - LittleRedsWolf2dCommented
doesn't see me, does he?
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piled themselves together *
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The wolves immediately surrounded the knight,prepating to pounced at him. - LittleRedsWolf2dCommented
Those wolves *
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12 wolves, one of which has a larger body.
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This paragraph doesn't read well. If you read it out loud, your brain will recognize what is wrong. Also, ensure you have a space after periods.
It fits perfectly and offers better protection against its internal structures.Although It makes some other features unable to be activated,currently those features are damaged and broken.So the machine put on the armor and buried the dead human. - LittleRedsWolf2dCommented
I would take a look at your chapter, some word are capitalized when they shouldn't be, and others should be capitalized. Grammerly is a helpful tool to use.
Chapter 2.Lich - LittleRedsWolf3dCommented
It seems like this is the end*
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