Comments of chapter undefined of HOTD- Family above All

You can continue as it is and add a romance between rhanerya and mc

I recommend more depth, sometimes things are a little quick, besides, it would be cool to show the impact of the MC's actions, for commoners and nobles, a balance between the micro and the macro would be ideal for a better view of the world and those who live in it. there.

a bit more detail wouldn't hurt

Good I like the current style of the story But I would also like it to have more details for example How the people and nobles react to the things Mc does For example when he brought the dragon egg back I would really like to see the King's reaction of the princess and the nobles and the people, I think it's better to just show people's reactions to the things that Mc does, which I think if you put too much detail into the story it will get very boring

Both, depends on what detail is being focused on. If more detail make the pacing too slow, then it is not preferable. As long as similar pacing can be continued,more details will be appreciated.Details about romance, war, conflict, and politics is appreciatied,

It is perfect as it is

No

you are doing great as it is

its good enough, i like the way you write.

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No

No, its ok

Posting longer and more number of chapters would be much appreciated

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Немного подробнее было бы лучше.

Details are always good choices

Incorporate the giants to his army and teach them how to build architecture! They are a great force against the dragons, imagine a giant army with crossbow...

Yeah. A little more detail wouldn’t hurt, but not the kind of detail that slows the plot. For example, talking about how he unlocked an ability, and his bloodline the ability is known to exist in the purest of bloodlines. And it’s said to…….see something like this you’re slowing the plot. And…..it’s not nice. But a little detail wouldn’t hurt, maybe where it’s needed, I don’t know where since I don’t know how you plan to develop the story, but a little wouldn’t hurt.