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Fairy tail or Korra wouldn’t be bad. Also I’ve been reading this fan fic for the past three days now, and I’m really impressed. Extremely. I wanted to know if you’ve thought about writing about some novels too, some popular ones or some you’ve also been interested like, Swordmaster’s Youngest Son, The beginning after the end, you know….those kind of novels.
Yeah. A little more detail wouldn’t hurt, but not the kind of detail that slows the plot. For example, talking about how he unlocked an ability, and his bloodline the ability is known to exist in the purest of bloodlines. And it’s said to…….see something like this you’re slowing the plot. And…..it’s not nice. But a little detail wouldn’t hurt, maybe where it’s needed, I don’t know where since I don’t know how you plan to develop the story, but a little wouldn’t hurt.
So far so good. Don’t over complicate it. You want to write “your” story, so it’s “your” story. We…..I am not expecting the exact same thing as the manhwa . It’s like a different timeline so I’m interested to see how it unfolds, take your time and deliver. So far everything is good. I’m enjoying it and I want you to do more.