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Great character but you killed this fic before it even started there should Be no changes in planatus if you change it then it not really planatus now is it you you should try giving the mc powers but the rest of them should be left un touched otherwise it will kill the story please consider this before going any further
Great start but please post more chapters 5-10 at least in the beginning so that the story can get some momentum