Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnate as a Zorua in a Pokemon world
Reincarnate as a Zorua in a Pokemon world
RyenMC
Chapter comments28
please stop with the ''bu-bunery'' o ''lu-lupony'' it freaks me out, can you just make them speak normally? you can even put parenthesis in the dialogue just avoid the stupid pokemon talk
To be honest, leaving it like that is okay. It would be confusing later when the novel progressed to the point where there is a lot of people. After all, people can’t understand pokemon, and so it would be better to distinguish what is talking. Idk
RyenMC: I write it this way because the MC is bad at remembering Pokémon species, so he gives them nicknames or simply remembers them by the animal they are familiar with. But well, in the next chapter, I will conduct a survey to see if I should remove it or not
I felt very uncomfortable writing this chapter. I even had to rewrite it three times because, for some reason, when I reread it, only conspiracies appeared in my mind, and I don't want to add that kind of thing during the early plot because it would be a heavy burden for the MC. But I gave up on the third rewrite. This happens to me because I only have time to write it at night, being very tired.
