RyenMC
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2023-03-06 JoinedColombia
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RyenMC3mthCommentedThe move that Eevee used was Flail, which is a move that becomes stronger the less health the Pokémon has.
And when she was close enough to Eevee, she used <drain punch> and Eevee staggered before counterattacking using its tail. When my sister's fist and Eevee's tail collided, both were propelled several meters away and their bodies tumbled on the ground several times before coming to a stop.- RyenMC3mthReplied to Swone56
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The place fell completely silent for several seconds and we were all watching to see if any of them would get up. To my good fortune, my sister ended up getting up, only she was covered in bruises. - RyenMC3mthCommented
The move that Eevee used was Flail, which is a move that becomes stronger the less health the Pokémon has.
This paragraph has been deleted. - RyenMC3mthReplied to DragonkingKyo
because she crashed several times into the ground due to Eevee's attack
The place fell completely silent for several seconds and we were all watching to see if any of them would get up. To my good fortune, my sister ended up getting up, only she was covered in bruises. - RyenMC3mthCommentedI ignored that thought because I'm not interested in meddling in other people's lives, and I don't like gossiping either. So I focused on Reinor, who used a Poké Ball and the Pokémon that appeared was an Eevee.
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Eevee
I ignored that thought because I'm not interested in meddling in other people's lives, and I don't like gossiping either. So I focused on Reinor, who used a Poké Ball and the Pokémon that appeared was an Eevee. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Swift
When the presenter gave the signal to start, Reinor's Eevee jumped several meters and then swung its tail, which had started to glow before launching star-shaped projectiles towards my sister. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Buneary's thought: Who do you think you are to say that I need luck to defeat you? I'll make you eat your own words.
"You don't have to invent a name to avoid telling me what your name is, sweetheart. Still, I wish you good luck because you'll need it if you want to beat me." I felt quite upset by what he said to the point of wanting to jump on him and use all the biting moves I learned to tear his neck apart. But I calmed down when I saw how my sister seemed quite angry at what he said, and that made me very happy because it shows that she appreciates me. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Wooloo
My opponent took out a Poké Ball from which came a sheep with black wool on its face and legs, and the rest of its body was covered in white wool. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Yungoos
The same trainer put Aipom away before bringing out another Pokémon whose name I couldn't remember, but it looked like an otter (Yungoos), which exchanged moves with Minccino. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Aipom
I watched as in the exchange of moves, Aipom ended up under the effect of charm and refused to attack Minccino, who ended up giving it a few hits before stopping until Aipom was completely defeated. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Deerling
"Lopunny (Don't worry about such small details)." I could only shake my head a little and start watching the television again, which now showed the girl we just met bringing out a Minccino against a Deerling that seemed a bit agitated. - RyenMC3mthCommented
Minccino
"Lopunny (Don't worry about such small details)." I could only shake my head a little and start watching the television again, which now showed the girl we just met bringing out a Minccino against a Deerling that seemed a bit agitated. - RyenMC3mthReplied to Drojam
It's one of the GIFs that has made me laugh the most so far, and about the Super Ball, it was a mistake, I meant the Great Ball.
I stopped paying attention and observed my surroundings. I felt much calmer when I saw my mother, sister, and Swadloon riding on the Pokémon that Liza used as a mount to get to the den. It's quite strange to see several Pokémon using another as a mount. It would be like seeing a horse being ridden by rabbits. - RyenMC3mthReplied to Ivory_Rouge
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[Foxuark] - RyenMC3mthReplied to Haku_Ouroboros
I didn't even know about the existence of that character, it saves me from creating an image of his little sister.
Kurle. - RyenMC3mthReplied to Khrys_LanguinCh 17 Chapter 17
- RyenMC3mthReplied to DragonkingKyoCh 17 Chapter 17