Comments of chapter undefined of Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
NewComer714
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I just didn't expect the author to go the way of using these stupid cliches. A father who for some reason interferes with his son, which makes no sense. A girl who is in love with him, but wants to suck off Harvey for the role. Even after kissing Lucas, she was thinking about Harvey. I just wanted the work to be as carefree as the 200 chapters before. It is this insouciance that distinguishes this work from others. Anyway, I hope you know what you're doing. And you don't have to worry about haight, sooner or later every author will face this)
Oh i see. However, this is goodbsinc eit will give the mc an evidence that his success is unrelated to his family support. On the next point tho, i did not understand you. What do you mean about that Hollywood famous
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Okay, a suggestion: I don't know if you will read this, but I think making the situation solely on, "should I become her bf to save her from a bad guy" felt a little out of place, only a little. If you used different wording like, "I have feelings for her but if I have to say them early then I would if it can calm her down" then that would have been more better as right now mc feels like sacrificing himself for her. Comment: You are doing great job my guy, and romance to a monotonous novels like total action and even like yours where totally acting is going on gives more color. Don't feel bad because of those who left because they are too used to webnovel's ruthless mcs or emotionless mcs. I never understood these people [not talking about all of them] saying these emotionless things here as to what mc should have acted, like do they treat people and relations like friendship in reality like shi-? But, I must say this novel is good and romance, while being rushed isn't really that bad. So, don't feel down. Anyways, thanks for the chapter and great work.
