Thanks for the chapter

Okay, I like it. I know people don't like this, but, really its normal for me. I find chinese cultivation bs more annoying than this. In this, its showing a guy who was evil and now is trying to be good. Its absolutely perfect he would think things like this, even compare his actions with good people he have met or observed. I can't say for all but people in webnovel really like villians and mc's who kill left and right. They are expecting everyone to do it with their MCs [not all but quite a few]. Anyways, I find this perfectly nice except for the fact that mc talk more but plot is shown less. Like author should also show the scenes happening in length. Its like I can remember more of him talking to himself [thoughts and self talk], and less things happing in plot including his conversation to others. Not that its exact number, but for me after reading I felt like this. The way author is writing is perfect for me, it just needs a little more plot, and a little less self talk [just a little amount]. If people are talking about this then well I think they are correct in my view. Also, with his trying to be good from bad guy, author should change plot a little more from main plot. Like not following the plot because mc doesn't need to as he has super powers now. Just my ranting, no need to pay attention if it felt useless, or a suggestion if you feel its good enough. Anyways, nice job and thanks for the chapter.

Well I think your opinion only works for the established actors or singers. For example if a new actor dresses casual against established one. Reactons will be like: New - "This guy is homeless" or "Is he trying to be like my favorite star" or something along the line. Established or old one - "Did you see how cool he looked without all that extravaganza" or "He always wears casual but still shows his charm" These things can't be removed from fans mind. So, yeah people judge and new actors or stars need to be considerate. Anyways, I just put an argument for your comment. It wasn't me invalidating yours but just putting my view.

Also, minato made it for his style of fighting, but with mc here you can just edit the technique however you want as minato still might be working on it. There is no need for you to feel like you might leave a plot hole as the technique isn't even at a level it was in "hokage minato's" hand.

I think this has more to do with tobirama being hokage while researching more techniques. He could only get a little time to make that technique from the start. He could have made progress, but died before his natural expiry. But, yes Minato has more better technique than tobirama's because he didn't have to create it, but only improve it. Now mc has tobirama's template, he can work with minato while making the technique even more better.

Voldemort never played by rules, aka killing or inflicting pain and all. Dumbledore never wants to hurt, even though he likes to manipulate others, but he himself never kill others. Voldemort uses that. Voldemort used draco to kill Dumbledore for the same reason. Dumbledore with elder wand might be a boss level monster, but even without it, he is or was a prodigy of Voldemorts level. He is a person who Grindelwald admired, the person who can give Voldemort run for his money.

Mc:

Well, he created a fear factor for future politicians. No one would be able to live a smooth life knowing they are corrupt until he is caught. So, in a way, he did good, but at the same time, some bad people are necessary in government too, only if they are doing the right thing but using slightly twisted means. Not bad like criminals, mind you, but only a little twisted.

I would say that conversation written by author in this fanfic looks natural, and quite good. Good job in this work author. Thanks for the chapter.

Nice ending. So, what's the next book about, if any?

1. Well she is double faced in the context of anime (might be because of devil psychology which might not be her fault), she let issie(this is the spelling i think) die before making him a devil. She even tried to play it off by not telling him, and saying she cared because if she did then she would have made the affer before. 2. She is lazy, can't even make herself stronger but is searching for savior. 3. She didn't even help her peerage with their traumas in the years they were together, she didn't even ask her brother for help in this because of her ego as she says, "I want to be known as Rias not a gremory". Well the 1st one is the main factor and last two are salt to the injury. So, hence proved the reasons for hating Rias. I don't hate her but I know why, so this is it.

No disrespect, but I just want to know if this fanfic. is up for me or not.

A question: Is this novel just same thing with different ability that does the same thing as mc's original quirk? Nothing changed till now except for some minor things, that aren't even necessary. I just want to know if this is going to be the case, because I don't want to read same anime 'my hero academia' in light novel form with mc having different ability.

Update?

Well, the assumption is you know how to write well, but just want chatgpt to improve the grammatical mistakes. If you want to do whole makeover of the text, then you need to check after chatgpt has done its job, or it would look obvious.

Well mc couldn't take risk on a speculation, you know? If they die, they aren't coming back like goku. But, I think you are right about them not being that weak, however in a perspective of a person who they are related to [i.e. our mc], I don't think he will leave.

What if he teleports freeza and then come back to see everyone dead because of freeza's force?

Pokemon ff, or marvel with mc as winter soldier.