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Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top

Mithren
MithrenLv6Mithren

lots of off sentences and words that need adjusting. Didn't bother pointing them out cause I was trying to just read through. Enjoying the story but those off elements disrupt the flow for me

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OniReader
OniReaderLv3OniReader

Nice to see siblings acting like real siblings, arguing lol

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv13PancakesWitch

the interaction with the sister felt realistic, well done. im tired of sisters acting like baby submissive girls to their brothers from the beginning, it always ends up becoming even worse later when the author decides to introduce their fetishes into the narrative. but it seems you're not into that, so thats a plus... i can't believe im saying being normal is a plus, but webnovel has become such a shthole lately with these horrendous stories.

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Adenuga_Stephen
Adenuga_StephenLv12Adenuga_Stephen

Author is the best

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Grey1
Grey1Lv13Grey1

Tftc

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DaoistktXBd6
DaoistktXBd6Lv1DaoistktXBd6

I love it! It's a comforting story so far. I can't wait to see how Jake can be good enough to play with his sister- not in years, but in months!

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WildeEnthusiast
WildeEnthusiastLv12WildeEnthusiast

well written interactions so far and relatable characters, have a power stone.

Kroxius
KroxiusLv11Kroxius

So Mary is not even a supporting character? I thought we'd have more of the arguing elder sister trope! Even some hunts and quests!? She is just 3 months ahead of him anyway, no? PS: Elder sisters are the worst irl(personal experience)☠️🤐 Well, sibling relations are always like that, anyway

TruthAlfa
TruthAlfaLv4TruthAlfa

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