CAESAR20
Author comments in the author comment box maybe..... Also longer chapters or more substance/ story. There are too many info dump chapters. Also there is a chapter 20 paywall incoming. Mr.Author I will not critisize too harshly, but there is not enough solid story content to justify paying for your story so soon. Please look at your story and think hard if it is worth paying for at chapter 20. Thank you for sharing your story though.