Spideryou
Nathenge to say
of reading
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I won't say anything until I see more chapters after that. I will comment on what you write
Personally, that's fine for you as a first chapter. You can try Microsoft Translation if you're struggling with Google Translation. Don't despair, keep going. It's good as a first novel for you. I'll see how much I rate more after I see the world and character design