I hope you don't give up on this, dear author. Keep giving, despite some spelling errors, but the quality of the plot makes up for all of that.

As usual, I still say that this novel will be one of the best novels ever. Just watch it as time goes by. Keep it up, writer. I encourage you

Thank you for the chap

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

A good novel, as other reviews say, and by reading it I found that it is good, but just try to make the paragraphs smaller, as long paragraphs give people headaches.

Hmmmm, it's a good chapter, but keep going