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Comments of chapter undefined of DC: Failsafe

Beyond_
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Have you ever thought about how the story would develop or did you just write an idea and add things?

Lord_Sadness
Lord_SadnessAuthorLord_Sadness

Bit of both

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

It would have been cool if the sentience the system gained was a self-insert from our world. The way this android acted was too typical comic book story beat for me. You can see how the story will progress. They found out about the android way too soon and he didn’t get a chance to ramp up. I would have liked to have seen the android assemble technology to acquire data from people’s minds like Brainiac, scan and absorb the minds of scientists like Professor Ivo who knows how to create Amazo, and upgrade his body to become like Amazo so he can copy all the powers of the Justice League. Then, I would have liked to have seen him make hundreds of backup bodies and forks of consciousness like Ultron so they could never be rid of him. Finally, acquiring a Green Lantern ring (for interstellar flight and access to advanced alien tech) to get a bunch of backup bodies off-planet and into different star systems. I like this story though. Interested to see where it will go.

RandomMobA
RandomMobALv4RandomMobA

This failsafe is obviously meant for the dark multiverse batmen. I'm all for that and even can't wait for the showdown but for now. I just want this guy to have an actual father and son conversation with his creator.

Bharath_M984
Bharath_M984Lv4Bharath_M984

I kind of want this failsafe to get strongerI mean like really strong.To take on everything that comes like heroes, villains, gods, devil's, cosmic entities, even if lucifer comes it should have the power to kill him.

SoulsBorne_Lover
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iliacube
iliacubeLv4iliacube

dont think it fits all the time, but I'm imagining fail safes voice and system notifications sounding like Ultron from new avengers, heroes of tomorrow.

Destroyer3000
Destroyer3000Lv4Destroyer3000

Your back

WhiteDeath113
WhiteDeath113Lv4WhiteDeath113

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InfinityWolfS2
InfinityWolfS2Lv2InfinityWolfS2

Não sei oque dizer, mais achei meio decepcionante. Acho que coloquei minhas expectativas muito altas.

LordAinzSama
LordAinzSamaLv5LordAinzSama

I love this

DaoistKBb6xH
DaoistKBb6xHLv1DaoistKBb6xH

Thanks for the new chapter

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks

InfamousFudge_Yt
InfamousFudge_YtLv13InfamousFudge_Yt

this is good keep it up author,

Klynt_The_Frog
Klynt_The_FrogLv4Klynt_The_Frog

Thanks for the chapter :)

_chalk_
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When will you be back!!

Zbara_1577
Zbara_1577Lv4Zbara_1577

Update or…

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

Thank you for the chapter 🥰

Kranox
KranoxLv4Kranox

Thanks for the chapter