Bad writing is a sin
The author doesn't know how to express the characters' emotions very well. The logic of using eye powers and developing the system is a little bad. Is it serious that he said his Quirk is to bring the concept of limitlessness into reality? What the fuck, what do you think All for One's reaction will be when they hear this? Do you even remember that there is a spy in your room? and did you even consider that it wouldn't be at least suspicious for someone to have their Quirk change to something as absurd as unlimited? Why doesn't anyone question the fact that his pupils change when using his Quirk? The teachers should have realized this when watching him audition, and why the hell doesn't he wear a contact lens?
dozens of years in the future, chatgpt will sue you for copyright, at least mention his name in the description .................................
It's useless to have all the kekkei genkai, he won't use them all in the end, he may even waste time learning them all but in the end it will be that, a waste of time, if he isn't going to use them to their full potential it would be better not to have them from the beginning
it's very well written, the story is still in its initial stages and the protagonist has had no real conflicts other than the trap of the Goddess who sent him, but it's an interesting start and looks promising, of course, if it's not abandoned like 99% of fanfictions, please write a good story author
How do you expect him to explore the world without any strength? he literally almost died on the first day
a fanfic that doesn't blindly follow the original work, with many things added by the author that are so far very good, I would like to read this work until the end but the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment, so I won't get my hopes up.
Will the chapters that will be posted here just be the ones that have already been posted on fanfiction.net? 23?