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Bad writing is a sin

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_1d
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    Ch 8 "What a beautiful elf!"
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    Shining God in Danmachi
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_1d
    Replied to Darkened007

    馃懡

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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_3d
    Commented

    What

    Ch 13 Chapter Thirteen: The Winter Solstice.
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    Shadow Slave: From the Depths
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
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    It's ironic that you're proud to publish a story that wasn't made by you

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    Reincarnated Into The Walking Dead
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Replied to Thoth0

    the most Chinese comment I've read

    Ch 37 Chapter 37 Rank Evaluation 2, Shocked World!
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Posted

    The author doesn't know how to express the characters' emotions very well. The logic of using eye powers and developing the system is a little bad. Is it serious that he said his Quirk is to bring the concept of limitlessness into reality? What the fuck, what do you think All for One's reaction will be when they hear this? Do you even remember that there is a spy in your room? and did you even consider that it wouldn't be at least suspicious for someone to have their Quirk change to something as absurd as unlimited? Why doesn't anyone question the fact that his pupils change when using his Quirk? The teachers should have realized this when watching him audition, and why the hell doesn't he wear a contact lens?

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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Replied to neis_marko

    Pokemon

    Ch 4 Chapter - 4 Diving In and Out of Depression
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Posted

    dozens of years in the future, chatgpt will sue you for copyright, at least mention his name in the description .................................

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
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    It would be more interesting to see him master few things and revolutionize and transcend in these things like swordsmanship or a kekkei genkai, it will just be frustrating to see him be mediocre in all kekkkei genkai

    Ch 1 - 1 - Three Gifts, One Destiny
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Commented

    It's useless to have all the kekkei genkai, he won't use them all in the end, he may even waste time learning them all but in the end it will be that, a waste of time, if he isn't going to use them to their full potential it would be better not to have them from the beginning

    Ch 1 - 1 - Three Gifts, One Destiny
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Replied to JFalcon

    Have you written another story before?

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_4d
    Posted

    it's very well written, the story is still in its initial stages and the protagonist has had no real conflicts other than the trap of the Goddess who sent him, but it's an interesting start and looks promising, of course, if it's not abandoned like 99% of fanfictions, please write a good story author

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    Shadow Slave: From the Depths
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_8d
    Replied to Otaku_Gamer_00007

    馃あ

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_10d
    Replied to Zzz_808

    How do you expect him to explore the world without any strength? he literally almost died on the first day

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_10d
    Replied to NexusPrimodius

    dont give up

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    Naruto: Blood & Pleasure
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_10d
    Posted

    a fanfic that doesn't blindly follow the original work, with many things added by the author that are so far very good, I would like to read this work until the end but the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment, so I won't get my hopes up.

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    Naruto: Blood & Pleasure
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_10d
    Replied to Sword_1mmortal

    馃拃

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    A New Life In How To Train Your Dragon
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_11d
    Replied to freeraynman

    Will there be more chapters besides 23?

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    THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander
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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_11d
    Replied to freeraynman

    Will the chapters that will be posted here just be the ones that have already been posted on fanfiction.net? 23?

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  • Beyond_
    Beyond_12d
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    I have doubts about the author's beauty standards

    Ch 4 Call me John
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