Comments of chapter undefined of Prison School +Plus
Prison School +Plus
InstaMoist
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it looks like four idiots (or at least the one who said this phrase) have made a mortal enemy. Kiyoshi can't even blame Meiko now that he's been framed so deeply. I hope he has the backbone not to get away with this, even if he has to be in the same cell with them. As a result, of course, I am upset by the result, but I am not surprised. Marie is very stupid when faced with her predrasutki, but do not look at the main plot is in prison. Again, following the policy of saving oneself and presenting others is the most logical and not even discussed.
F**k... seeing you this excited makes me even more afraid of disappointing you. To be honest, I already have a lot of stock for this fanfiction, and changing the plot of a story I've written to please my readers is not my hobby... d*mn it, if it's like this, I'll just do whatever I want.
Darkstel:Oh, actually I can't blame you for not giving up a big chunk of the plot...plus there will be Hana with whom even the original Kiyoshi found ;-). Considering that your "improved" version of the character is not fixated on one girl, it will be much more interesting (don't get me wrong, Chiyo is a wonderful girl and I see her in the harem, but Kiyoshi's fixation on this girl after all that he unwittingly created with Hana in the process causes raising eyebrows and suspicions of unhealthy obsession) Plus, from my point of view, even in this situation there are exits and opportunities for our hero to regain his position. The first option is canonical and stupid, where Kiyoshi would put everything on the brakes on the principle that I set you up and you set me up, let's survive together (boring). The second option is rude, where Kiyoshi will openly start antagonizing the other men, it is logical that in this situation he will be persecuted and abused by the other four, but the reverse side of the coin goes with the expectation of jailers. Hana and Meiko will be affected by such persistence in terms of doubts that Kiyoshi stands out as guilty in this regard. The third option of the cunning snake is to "make peace" with the others and as a result, in your favor, as much as possible, substitute them under and push each other with foreheads in parallel, building an exemplary prisoner out of yourself, as a minus the risk of being caught, which will return everything to the second option, and obviously by default in this scenario, Kiesa will have to pretend to be guilty. This is only a couple of possibilities out of many actions, so the plot is still interesting in potential. Moreover, there is a risk that Kiyoshi's Deja Vu seizures will intensify in that place if you still use this of course.
Supongo que harás que tú mc actúe como si fuera genio , pero la final es tonto y su cerebro no le funciona , ya que todo lo que hizo fue una tontería .. haaaa... No me gusta esta tonta trama de meterlo y hacerle de justiciero, hubiera tomado otro camino , y ser la diferencia, pero la final tendremos un mc de montón de fanfic que siempre van por este camino.
Good chapter, interesting this MC, similar to the original but with its differences, which makes the story have its beloved comic tone.With all these small but important changes I can't wait for the prison arc to begin (if it doesn't get saved) surely it's going to be more interesting future scenarios with possibly some small or big changes that differ to the original.
