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Comments of chapter undefined of (Kaito)

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(Kaito)

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GhostAKilla
GhostAKillaLv14GhostAKilla

made me teared up a lil

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

This is so stupid for many reasons. 1) That healing jutsu wouldn’t turn his hair white. As a child, his vitality is immense as an Uzumaki with many years ahead of him. Nagato only turned his hair white because his life force was extracted from the Gedo Mazo. I think you made his hair turn white to just make him look like an edgelord. It makes no sense. 2) They wouldn’t seal the 9 tails in their newborn son. With the MC there, he’s close to the age Kushina was when she became a Jinchuriki. As an older Uzumaki, he would be a better candidate to become a Jinchuriki. Plus, with his red hair, it appears his Uzumaki side is dominant. Again, this would prompt the genius Minato to consider the MC a better container than a newborn baby. Babies aren’t usually used to make Jinchurikis. 3) Making the MC get knocked out was forced plot. And having him miraculously wake up right before his parents die so he cam listen to their speech? Even more forced plot. 4) You kept everything 99% like canon, making no effort to change anything. Just leaving Kushina alive? That doesn’t make this fic worth it, I’m sorry. I just don’t see the point of this fic.

Professor_Light
Professor_LightLv4Professor_Light

finally something change, I thought it would just be a reenacment of the series

Weizenbrot14
Weizenbrot14Lv4Weizenbrot14

white hair ? seriously I mean just look at Karin who use the ability her whole live

Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

So... The other part of kurama is just staring at everything doing nothing, right? Bs

XAZVAPB0OTH
XAZVAPB0OTHLv4XAZVAPB0OTH

finalmente alguma mudança, espero que ele não seja um manipulado pelo terceiro hokage, as fanfic de naruto tendem a ser estupidas assim como a pessoa que criou elas.

Mercurio
MercurioLv2Mercurio

I thought it was a new chapter

TrueKnight
TrueKnightLv3TrueKnight

I didn't understand :/

Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv3Hasan_Shopnil

TftC. Thank Goodness atleast Kushina Survived,Minato should've sealed the Other Half of Kurama/Nine-Tailed Fox in Kaito,Anyway,I was Contemplating DROPPING this Fic If Nothing Changed from Canon. Also,In the Future MC should at least Save Izumi Uchiha&Mikoto Uchiha during Uchiha Massacre and Maybe Warn Shisui to be wary of Danzo and Itachi to Not trust the Village Elders Specially Danzo so easily. Also,Maybe MC should also Yakumo Kurama and maybe have Yugao Uzuki as One of his Girlfriend.

That_Guynate
That_GuynateLv13That_Guynate

Would’ve been better of to let her die

RDZCHILL_JR
RDZCHILL_JRLv4RDZCHILL_JR

I did not see that coming

Tiktark
TiktarkLv14Tiktark

is his lifespan shortened or will he regain his life energy somehow?

waydown
waydownLv1waydown

minato would have sent the other half into kaito if he determined that kushina won't survive

Magasu_senpai
Magasu_senpaiLv14Magasu_senpai

TruthAlfa
TruthAlfaLv4TruthAlfa

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Hephaestu
HephaestuLv2Hephaestu

To jest świetne autor plis nowy rozdział