Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
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I hope there will be more problems with the Bible and the story of Adam. Who associated Adam della Bible with Adam The immortal had to be an employee of one of the banks, but why does the Bible speak badly? Adam brought great wealth to bankers (they knew how to read and write and therefore they are responsible for having mentioned it in the Bible) I would have expected something like Adam who guides humanity and not Adam cursed to not die. Maybe the New Testament presents Adam differently?
It's a great fic. Thank you author. My only concerns are how lenient he is with the volturi, and why is Chelsea still alive. (Seriously, plz plz kill her off, I'm seeing some disturbing possibilities). Other than that, i love the characters, world building and the fact that you're adding all these details. And yea no major time skips sounds good
imagine when the Cullen coven will be like "The Volturi will come for your child Edward. and we can't stop them." que everyone looking defeated and Carlile be like " there is one we must find. the one they call the "first " The one man calamity, the one they called the Right hand of Mars. We must find Adam "Jacob be like " Adam who?Carlile be like " The Adam. The one in the Bible "
I don't know why but I keep imagining MC's mate being Someone like Tom Bennett from world on fire. I mean seriously it's just feels right it will be interesting to see him have a male mate since there never has been one in Twilight and him earlier saying that he doesn't like men and then later becoming mate with a male is pretty hilarious. The time line is during the Second world War.
