need New CHAP

A fic that has potential, no grammar mistakes, persistent update rate, short chapters(unfortunately), a little fastpaced opening arc for my taste and lastly unknown world background(MC didnt even do any research to find out witch verse he is) overall good for curing boredom.

yeea

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thx for chapter, nice and unique fanfic pls do not drop.

give sterly some power like longevity&power augmentatiom

did he just created a Galaxy or even 40k universe!??

green haired? wasnt it white now

is Raizel of this fic injured like OG? Also does organisation that experiment with other races to gain power in noblesse exist in this fic(i hope not, they are annoying)

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marked

yea

thx for answering, as for evolved beings that will/might appear on further chapters, i think it is going would be awesome, i mean enhance a normal human, you get beginner lvl dummy for MC but, enhance a kronan or Makluan you get boss lvl adversary. I dont think readers will bat an eye as long as there wont be an enhanced celestial (nearly impossible ik, they use cosmic energy and it is one of highest tier energy in marvel, and plot would be no different than chinese cultivation series lol) This really has potential and blessed with an author who is striving to improve. [powerstone drop initiated]

thx for the chapter and thank you for implementing my suggestion to the story, idk if it would distrupt your plans for future chapters but if you find this suggestion helpfull, you can make MC absorb all remaining diluted energy in future chapters when he is strong enough. With that future problems can be solved more easily. Idk details about mutated humans but i think they are either evolved becaouse of initial energy outburst and maintaining their powers with what is remaining of it, for example telekinesis can possibly work like magic ? users emit the energy that they absorb passively/actively like cultivators does with their dantian but in this case with their cells and fire then through telecinetic outburst thanks to their evolved brain and cells(cells could possibly become energy batteries and MC can drain them if so) same goes for muscle guy, yes he is pretty strong but that density of muscle mass need huge amount of nutrient and because of its mutated status diluted energy is its main nutrient like Superman. İf MC could absorb all scattered energy in atmosphere in the future muscle mass would detoriate and mutated human will die or downgraded to peak human.For energy type mutated it would be different, their mutation would remain but they would be no different from a cultivatior with no qi(lol) cannot use their powers... Second theory is mutation is permanent(i mean they are not bound to diluted energy after evolving) and energy types uses their own type of energy( bio electricity, mental force etc) as for brawler types they need huge amount of nutrients without energy in the atmosphere so either they will slowly detoriate to the point it is possible for them to support their muscles or nothing happens to them .

Yess, now in future chapters someone can interrogate Sunny and due to his flaw he will spill the beans sooner or later, then every organisation will hunt him down to use him as a potion factory then they will discover that he has regeneration and chop him over and over again... Plot gets fuxked the end.

Just an advice, as a veteran Novel reader and relatively experienced fanfic reader i would advice you that you souldnt keep your focus on beings evolving due to his energy(that occurance itself was a mistake in my opinion) because it gets Boring pretty fast and fans of marvel comics/ mcu may not like it because if world got a powerup like that og characters need powerup too and it makes everything messy(as if it isnt in og) so my idea make that energy disappear after a short time( you can use excuse of it being limited) as for mutated beings you can make MC took their energy(suck them off lol) because even if its diluted it is his energy after all.. After that of along the way MC can build his little custodes army lol

you can make MC go to han jue's multiverse, top tier providence.Characters of that verse has BS power lvl, a dao creator can solo tensuraverse easily(in my opinion even a strong sage can) also at the end MC become omnipotent, omniscient, omnipresent... He created outside of blank meaning he created someting in nothingless outside of his verse... this achievement puts him near azathoth level according to your fic.

recton make him like kryptonians, they were natural to other species(except wartime and conquering) wouldnt mess with you unless provoked or take your Planet/sources for themselves, loyal and passionate about their own species, (can also make mcs subject like this too) and lastly in their book, fırst comes their species and civilization, after that their own family and personal ambitions(there are exceptions of course and MC can be one like his survival and needs comes fırst) with this for his subjects most important being would be him because if for some reason he dies, their race is fcked up...

Recton

by average galvan he means not the level of azmuth, just a normal galvan civillian(they are much more smarter than humans but nothing compared to azmuth)