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Ripperdoc121dCommentedCh 25 Chapter 25- Ripperdoc122dCommented
I'd say he is half elf or numan
Our Aldril is arrogant, because he thinks he will be able to do better on the journey and there is an important moment coming up about Aldril's identity, who do you think his parents are and his lineage? Give me your predictions... - Ripperdoc123dCommented
it was good info
If any chapter I've written deserves the title lore dump, it would be this one. I tried to stuff it into the next chapter but it really didn't match the flow so I just made it as interesting as I could. As I've said, I write until the chapter feels complete and for better or worse that can make my chapter length vary. - Ripperdoc124dCommentedCh 103 The Final Piece
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To be the best blacksmith
A normal life - Ripperdoc125dCommented
are his parents Egyptian
Entering through the gates, there is a long driveway leading to a roundabout. After parking, we exited the car. Exit as in, my parents exit and my father takes me out, only after kissing my forehead and whispering, "Welcome to your new home, Helios Anun El-Ra, you like?" - Ripperdoc127dCommentedMen on both sides let out animalistic screams as they beat one another to death with anything they could use. While others sat on the ground staring off with a dead look in their eyes holding what remained of their friends. Some cried out for their loved ones as they bled out, others rolling around trying to put out the fires on them.
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It kind of makes sense but he should save for a good tech weapon he can vamp up to punch through 4th tier armor if needed. And maybe he could make a Faraday cage Armour but have it so it has a electromagnetic field around it to repl bullets.
AN—Was the Tier system for weapons and armor a bit too much? Since there is no HP and damage in this world, armor penetration is the only way for me to simulate combat, so I had to go through this way! - Ripperdoc129dCommented
a custom sawn off shotgun or the russian tech revolver when the knife don't work or if that revolver from phantom is available the weird magazine feed one
AN— MC will be buying the first gun in the next chapter! Which one do you think is best suited for the stealthy style? - Ripperdoc129dCommented"Thank you truly, Mister Gottes. I don't believe we would have made it through this voyage whole without your help." David Jones, the captain of the ship I had just departed from, said, as we shook fourarms.
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Nice to see elites get stomped
One of the MCUs punched one of the Elite in its gut and sent it flying back despite it being much taller than the MCU. The other MCUs did similar things as one of them had kicked one of the Elites sending it falling to the ground and then jumping on top of it as it continuously punched the Elite in the face until it was no longer recognizable. - Ripperdoc1217dReplied to JaxWolf4
I'm not mad
I pick him up and put him on my shoulder before heading towards The Tombs of the Star. - Ripperdoc1217dCommentedI pick him up and put him on my shoulder before heading towards The Tombs of the Star.
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It could work as long as he stays true to his beliefs and doesn't become scum. Also, would it be possible that he doesn't get a devil fruit cause he saw how easy the pirate was beaten.
Do you guys want a marine mc ? - Ripperdoc121mthCommented
just started
Anyone played Dragon's Dogma 2? Gameplay is damn near or is a 10/10 for me. The story, not so much. I feel like they had all the pieces to craft something great and then...just didn't. Its so odd, but what do I know, I'm only just beginning my journey into some degree of professional writing. Still enjoyed the game and plan on playing in my spare time. - Ripperdoc121mthReplied to Ripperdoc12Ch 3 Chapter 3
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is Mrs Norris a human in this story or a maladictus
"Work," Mrs. Norris replied. "I'm the new caretaker for Hogwarts. I'm also taking over some of the extra circulars from some of the professors." - Ripperdoc121mthCommented
Thank you
Arriving home, he wasted no time and quickly put the 50 thousand he took from his mother back into the box and then went to his room to hide the rest of the money. - Ripperdoc121mthCommentedCh 103 A Madman's Battle