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Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Alef_Biersack
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I wanted the vampire girl from the Volturi Clan who has the ability to cause pain to others or Alice or Roseli

Orion_Ridge
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Alice Cullen Thanks for your hard work!

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ouragan_
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an OC would be interesting, since the MC is one. Otherwise, a rather old vampire with interesting abilities. if this choice is not possible then Allice. Otherwise in another register, it would be interesting if the MC helped Carlisle Cullen during his youth.

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ouragan_
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Upon reflection, what would best suit the MC as a wife would be someone like Renesmee (Bella's daughter) or Nahuel. a hybrid who will be immortal while having a beating heart and the physical abilities of a vampire. I think a hybrid several centuries old would be a good idea.

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bob685014
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Bro. You are better off using an OC rather than choose a canon character. Other than Alice, the other female characters shown in twilight are meh. Even the attractive Denali's were basically sl*ts who literally invented the myths about succubi! So you are better off creating an OC character which will let you shape their looks, personality, and backstory however you want.

omni_potent_9409
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Alice Cullen is best

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Green_lazy1
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Jessica Stanley, is more interesting, to mold the character and their relationship itself, or it can also be Rosalie Hale, to help him make Avatar-type ships with her knowledge of mechanics

Kb_Killerboy
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Alice Cullen

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LongSongGolden
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One of the Denali's for sure. none of the Cullen/Olympic coven are old enough, it's such a waste to have the MC just hiding away until canon starts. by the time anything important starts happening he's still just going to be some old nobody that none of the vampires have ever heard of or seen before.

Jack_Moriarty
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Scáthach of Irish mythology

Zuesofolypus
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alice and Rosalie

Daoist6fIphA
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Rosalie hale

annaslut_pussycat
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I think you should make it all three Denali sisters after all none of them have a mate until a few years after the cannon begins, and even then only two of them find a mate and one of them is not even a true mate plus they’ve lived together so long I don’t think they really have that much of a problem sharing a mate

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magnetrelease
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jane

RadiantSight
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I think Angela would be cool but what about Leah Clearwater? That would be different and interesting 🤔 they’re immortal too afterall

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Shuten
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no oc romance

RichiV2_0
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Cleopatra

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UthredofBebbanburg
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Is it me or is Rosalie number actually BS since it’s overinflated by repeated comments??

Kirito_Luis_Lanuza
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Rosalía hale

alexis_vasquez_0632
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Kate denali and Alice cullen

Kml_Lmk
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Rosalie Hale