I mean football is a full on contract sport and he is a killing machine for which the smallest flinch would be enough to kill any and all of the teams players stupid enough to try to tackle him

Dude seriously just use your brain his ego is the very reason why he WOULD NOT!!! Let it go the very idea that such an ‘inferior’ being would even dare to even try and ‘lie’ to his face would drive him insane with rage so no my guy, Vidar is NOT letting that go.

Yeah that was me and it shows but just ask yourself this what would you do if you suddenly discovered an upcoming ‘business partner’ suddenly buying stock in your company and he just told you ‘ow no don’t worry I’m not’ when he met you ?? Would you just let it go and do nothing like avisar does here?? Even if you would do you think a millennia old supernatural entity like vidar would??

That’s no spirit though

I say he should put as much as he can and even leverage what he can to put even more in it after all as a commenter already explained it’s a winning bet.

So please be a dear and leverage as much of that as you can so I can short the housing market my minion 😂

Ok BUT…

They don’t and he has little point anything else darling ???

I mean hopefully he does get to tap Kendall Jenner and maybe Kylie too and why not even the hobbites queen herself Kim I mean some might not agree but honestly…

It’s just that’s the way it is will literally kill any possibility of the story progressing, mark my wort pretty soon you’ll find you’ve written yourself into a corner and that you just can’t do anything else without either dumbing characters down to single digit IQs or having some BS added villains or monsters that given how it’s your first story and no offense but you are CLEARLY no writing prodigy nothing you try will make sense and so you will find yourself facing the facts that I was right and a LOT of this needs a rework in order to keep future plots around and for the story to properly and naturally progress.

Not really what does ‘make something a little sense’ mean????

That’s why the DCEU didn’t follow the marvel plan and had several heroes with more than one movie before and actually introduced some heroes in the team up movie because they needed to change stuff

The problem is that the format was actually licensed by Marvel/Disney and the MCU I’m pretty sure

Hey wanted to ask about possible castings is he looking into say Jhonny Depp or Iron Man himself since RDJ didn’t let Marvel board him maybe something like that can help him not be typed as ‘just Iton Man’

Did you read that one though ?? I mentioned that there is stuff that NEEDS to be reworked and gave a few ideas and examples did you check it at least??

She doesn’t know about the prophecy and the attack had nothing to do with Neville and his magic his only limitation was his self esteem

Righteous system ?? What BS idiotic system

Yooo I wrote other reviews I’m sorry if I was harsh but I just like your idea in the setting and think you could do better btw I decided to explain and give suggestions in the last one in the 6th chapter as to what should change instead of the previous ranting sorry about that BYW as I said I liked the idea and suffered the mistakes in the execution

Yeahhhhh this needs to be rewritten as it is it’s actually maybe THE stupidest way to handle the revelation and that is ignoring the stupidity of the very choice of revealing things in the first place the smart choice would have been to protect them by handling the shotguns alone and let them find their powers and let them ask or tell him about them on their own.