Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

I'll pass. This MC is too much of a disappointment. Immortality for a moron\procrastinator, he will wake up one day "oh no, I could have done so much" or not done, like revealing his appearance then getting scared... at least if you wrote it that they removed his head cloth, no, you made it that he did it....

Bro has been living for 1000 and his higher intelligence didn't tell him: "Bro, learn a martial art or two." No, instead, he becomes nervous after seeing his first vampires. What is even more annoying is the fact that he's probably older than them.

In fact there is a gap in your story, you mentioned that he learned to fight (fighting arts) ...and he repeated it 2 times in a row

This is a disappointment

The MC has been alive for 1500 years and here he is getting nervous oml

This was extremely stupid. The MC is pathetic and dumb. He will remain virgin until canon starts....

I hope MC is able to steal abilities of vamps he kills… if not then that’s a waste

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I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for chapter

thx for the chap

Thank you for the chapter 🥰

😁👍

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

Nice