Honestly, MC is a complete idiot, at first he was looking for the manipulator and now his wife was raped and he doesn't do anything, useless!

simply because it seems that his knights seem so weak!.

honestly how come the uzumaki myth doesn't have the authority to do anything, even in the anime and manga she demonstrated that she had strength and authority over practically everyone while she was alive, and giving her technique to konoha was a bad choice, he could have invented something and saying that only he could use it, thus attributing more value to it, bad choice!

Honestly, I'm going to stop reading here, every fanfic that involves lookism the protagonists say they will be free and think only of themselves, but in the end they are always good and don't do anything bad, next time don't give false hope, goodbye! .

Great bloodline, not too dominated but enough to be strong, I hope he ends up with Ellia!

He has no ambitions and his goal is just to put his sister on the throne, I bet that when he manages to do that this fanfic will end, he's nothing more than a family dog!

very cowardly

I really liked this fanfic, other fanfics where MC was Grindelwald's grandson tried to be nice and change the legacy instead of accepting and prospering, they were like mice and ran or always helped the trio and that's honestly annoying, but this one seems to be different! .

discuss with mcgonagall!.

Does he have the mentality of a child?

I don't know what everyone has to do with going to Hogwarts, all the fanfics the MC goes there and the story is always the same, no one explores the world there's nothing outside of what the movies or books say and that's disappointing, I can imagine that you're going to make him fall in love with Harry's sister or some muggle, you're going to make him feel obligated to help the trio or something, it's always like that!

Leonard???, why him?

From the beginning he says he accepted being a vampire but every time he kills a human he gets sad, he is even helping humans, you make it seem like only humans can help him, why don't you write a fanfic about a human in instead of a vampire on the warhammer and why didn't he ask for better cultivation methods?

Well, then another hero fanfic!

I found the ways to make money very good, thus ensuring a prosperous future!

You would also do the same thing in his situation!

Nice

muito obrigado!!!!!.

muito obrigado pelo entusiasmo, vou me esforçar para melhorar e surpreender!.

NICEEEEEEEE HAHAHAHAHA