Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Valyria: King of Dragons

Your mc has a ridiculous sob story. There is no reason he can't take pride in running his own grocery shop. Or get a girl. It just tells me he is a weak self-imposed loser. Not a good start of your story...

Those are dumb wishes, especially the last wish. Wishing for long sleeps to recover his energy? So he can be easily killed in his sleep? Dumb. He should have wished to be able to absorb the life force of other living beings to recover his life force without a limit. That’s much less of a weakness than some Odinsleep nonsense.

Why an Odin Sleep like recovery? Why not take life-force back by killing others?

Good Chapter 👍

Wish granting, systems, and desired world of reincarnation make for a clown story. Never give your MC extraordinary advantages or any advantages for that matter. Their modern knowledge is already an unfair advantage, most so the familiarity with the world they’ve reincarnated in. This isn’t a great or good start, and quite honestly, the MC’s advantages are off putting. Dragonlords don’t have immunity to fire, maybe some minor level of resistance compared to the common man but not outright immunity.

i dont understand the power should not change the apparence if you wanted him to be raizel it should have been that it more logic

Thanks for chapter

gracias por el capitulo

Nice chapter

Interesante

I don't have anything to comment on the desires because I don't know Noblese, but in relation to his family, especially his father, I want to see revenge,They just tried to burn him alive and he's going to let it go without doing anything?

Tft

thank you for the chapter