Comments of chapter undefined of Redemption's Trial

interesting story looking forward to what's to come

There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but the stage has been set well

This is really an awesome start. I love it

I like the idea so far but I think the structuring and grammar needs to be worked on too.

nice Start, looking forward

Hey there! You do seem to have the plot in mind and I think that this story has potential. However, I think that fleshing the scenes out and working on the grammar and flow would take the series a long way.

looking forward to this

Hello! The chapter review is in!! 1. Please, revise...it will help you get more readers. 2. Use Grammarly. We all make errors. Let's machine help us catch them!!! 3. Again, keep your eye open for his/her, tense conflict and dialogue crafting. if you do this for all the chapters, you will do just fine. Please, fix the problems in the first chapter...then I will read it again. Let us help each other make our work better and earn some money in the process, shall we?