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ToufiqUlAlam

ToufiqUlAlam

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Hi! Dear Readers! Checkout my Books. 1. Strange Tales of A Little Mystic. 2. Aboron: An Elusive World of Adventure. Search my books with: Mashuk_Musafir23 (my contracted book account.)

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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam1d
    Replied to lyrianastarlight

    i thought so. the names and the nature of the characters and their dialogues don't match.

    She plopped down onto the ground, crying out, "If you don't help me today, I won't get up! Everyone, come look at this! My daughter is an ungrateful wretch! She's embarrassed by her mother's lowly background, so she's serving Old Mrs. Horton with such dedication! She wants to be their granddaughter now!"
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam7d
    Replied to Tmorey84

    not to mention the writer is at fault for our High blood pressure after reading this.

    "Although you're a special case here, we have never minded your lack of ability. We thought we could guide you, but your indifference to work is outrageous!"
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam16d
    Posted

    Hi! The author here! I believe the story is not getting enough attention. So, I will tell you a bit about the story. As you can see from the novel synopsis, there are four main characters: Tom, Cacey, the homeless man, and the Syndicate. First, we see two teenagers, Tom and Cacey. Tom is being bullied every day. He does not fight back because he does not want to create problems for his dad, who is proud of his family name and status. So, it's not that he cannot fight back; he chooses not to fight back. He wants to be loved and noticed by his father. But that never happens. Cacey, on the other hand, is a very timid and unbelievably beautiful girl. She is a very talented student, too. However, she is being wrongfully misunderstood by people in each of her past schools. She always has to transfer from one school to another, as living peacefully becomes really hard for her. Everyone notices her beauty with either love or hate and jealousy. She never does anything to anyone. The homeless man Edward is a very mysterious man with strange powers. He talks about a strange world, Aboron, in another dimension. Everyone has a chance to change themselves, but they must fulfill some conditions, which he never reveals. The Syndicate is an underground society of students from very powerful families who play gods on earth and have the power to control the lives of people. This heinous group controls the high school where Tom and Cacey go. This group is disgustingly resourceful and can render your effort to establish justice ineffective. At first, we see Tom and Cacey's troubled lives. We then explore their inner thoughts and their teenage efforts to run away from their problems. In the meantime, mysterious things keep happening to them. Their way of life suddenly changes after Tom and Cacey go on a trip, taking a voluntary leave of absence from their school. It was their way of avoiding the truth and the troubles of their lives. We will explore their inner fears and thoughts. Things start to happen quickly when Tom and Cacey come back from their trip. The events that followed quickly prepared them for their transmigration to the mysterious world of Aboron. I won't say anymore here. Otherwise, it will be no fun!!! If you have any questions, you can ask me here. I will really be happy to see some interactions. Every writer adores it when readers read and appreciate their work. I, too, would be happy to talk to you about my story. But I won't give you any spoilers. You are always welcome to ask questions. Happy reading!!

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    Aboron: The Elusive World of Adventure
    Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam16d
    Posted

    Hi! The author here! I believe the story is not getting enough attention. Okay, first of all, my stories have slow development. It's definitely not fast paced. At least not yet. Why? It's just the beginning. The story is massive. So far, it hasn't even gone past the initial phase. The characters are still being introduced. There are three main characters—Mizuno, The Ice Witch, and Suho. Mizuno is found in the jungle of Akunomori, and Suho is still in the hospital under constant surveillance. The Ice Witch, Dabria Fu, is looking for the arch nemesis of the Order of the Black Cross, a boy of prophecy. He is supposed to be from the line of mystics with mysterious divine powers. Each of the characters has their own backstory. The plot unfolds slowly as new world maps are revealed gradually. The story is like a treasure map. The Order of the Dark Cross, a female spy, a group of terrorists, and a team of dangerous commandos are targeting Suho, as they all suspect she saw something on the day of the incident. She is the witness to a crime or a weapon of mass destruction. If she witnessed the crime, she must be eliminated, and if she saw the weapon of mass destruction, she needs to be interrogated. Because the weapon can tip the balance of power between three neighboring nations. The Order of the Dark Cross has eyes everywhere. Suho has been cursed with a powerful jinn by the Ice Witch. A mysterious ancient man is seen in a cave in the jungle of Akunomori. If you have any questions, you can ask me here. I will really be happy to see some interactions. Every writer adores it when readers read and appreciate their work. I, too, would be happy to talk to you about my story. But I won't give you any spoilers. You are always welcome to ask questions. Happy reading!!

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    Strange Tales of a Little Mystic
    Fantasy · Mashuk_Musafir23
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam17d
    Commented

    why would they hate you? Dory's parents I mean.

    I mean what else can I do? My parents clearly hate me. Miss Lucy can't tolerate me. I am not allowed to go out alone. I'm supposed to be friend with people my parents approve. No dating, if the relationship doesn't benefit my parents. Just how f'ed up my life is. But gotta stay patient. And of course positive. Imma move back to Japan. Just few more years. And then I'm free from these people.
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    Lavender Field
    Urban · Winter
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam17d
    Commented

    what the hell kind of parent are they!

    "Give her first aid, then take her to hospital. Make sure it doesn't leave a scar." The man says.
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    Lavender Field
    Urban · Winter
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam17d
    Commented

    clash of tenses....better use one tense for narration. past or present. Revise is good. use quillbot or grammerly.

    We play for a long time and Felix also gives me a house tour. He also told he about his life here in Los Angeles and how he personally went to shop for my room with Miss Lucy after knowing I'll live with him from now on and that I love rabbits so he made the maids make it rabbit themed. I didn't meet my parents yet. When I asked about them Felix told me They are on a business trip to France and won't be back for the next two weeks.
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    Lavender Field
    Urban · Winter
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam17d
    Commented

    why use Korean character names?

    "I'm so sorry that I didn't introduce myself to you. Come here play with me." He grabs my hand and takes me to his play room filled with toys which I only ever seen on TV. "You can play with my toys as you want. Now let me introduce myself, my name is Han Felix. You can call me Han Juwon if you like. I only use my Korean name when in front of the family elders. Mama and dad told me that I can use my Korean name freely when we go to Korea. Do I talk too much?"
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    Lavender Field
    Urban · Winter
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam19d
    Commented

    i feel she was brought here to be sold off to a political marriage. right?

    "So, Miss Dore- ahem I mean Dorothy this is your home from now on. You are a young lady of a respectful family so behave from now on and most importantly try your best to forget about your life back in Japan."
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    Lavender Field
    Urban · Winter
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    she is fking everywhere...what the fk...

    Before he could finish his sentence, an angry voice ran out, "Finley Hill, Keira Olsen, what are you two doing?!"
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    thank good heavens at last it is out fk it took 40+ chapters...

    Keira hesitated for a moment then sighed. "Okay, I admit it. I am Dr. South."
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    what accomplishment did they see?

    "Such accomplishment at a young age..."
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    is this a south Asian drama?

    She plopped down onto the ground, crying out, "If you don't help me today, I won't get up! Everyone, come look at this! My daughter is an ungrateful wretch! She's embarrassed by her mother's lowly background, so she's serving Old Mrs. Horton with such dedication! She wants to be their granddaughter now!"
    altalt
    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
    detail
  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    she has been here for only a day or two...what r u talkinh about?

    "Although you're a special case here, we have never minded your lack of ability. We thought we could guide you, but your indifference to work is outrageous!"
    altalt
    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
    detail
  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    hahahahahahahaha, 100 percent correct 💯 prediction.

    Just as Keira thought of this, she fell into the warm and strong arms of someone...
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    yes, classic fall from ladder and caught by the hero. I still haven't read the next para but let me predict this.

    She then saw something. She dragged over a ladder, climbed up, and reached for the book.
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
    detail
  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    stupid fk go install a broadband line.

    Jalen took a deep breath, feeling that Keira was ungrateful!
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Commented

    yeah they r literally using gprs, 20 kb per second.

    When he left his computer, the attachment that had just finished buffering in the email was lying quietly in the interface...
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
    detail
  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Replied to Nebula_0290

    there should be limit to coincidences right? this story is the mother load of coincidences.

    He did a double take as if he had seen a ghost and saw Keira standing at the door with a chef's hat. A soft smile tugged on her lips as she introduced the day's dishes. Finally, she walked over to Lewis and whispered, "Mr. Horton, you should go check the Civil Affairs Bureau."
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    My Accidental Husband is a Billionaire!
    Urban · Mr. Yan
    detail
  • ToufiqUlAlam
    ToufiqUlAlam21d
    Replied to hansora

    hey, A request. please take look at my novels plz. they are under the name Mashuk_Musafir23. thanks. I would love to get some comments. thanks.

    That CEO Xu?
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    Win My Husband Over to Find My Child
    Urban · hansora
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