Comments of chapter undefined of Focused Fire (ATLA)

Uh i don’t Like this. This type of forced harem is not my cup of tea. I would prefer if it only be no harem, so just Azula and Xing, not Ty Lee and Sukiyaki who would join them. The Relationship between Azula and Xing is very well written and would suck to see it all go down the drain.

I just dont understand harems. They are so incredibly difficult to do well, actually, just romance in general is already hard to do and for once the author did a great job with the romance. Nothing out of left field, steady progress and then it finally happened. dont get me wrong, i like suki, i prefer her more than azula but it just doesnt feel right

Thanks for the chapter author. Though I want to say that you are playing a dangerous game lol. Ty Lee drama 2.0?

This might be the second worst chapter of this entire fic. Although i am biased. I. HATE. HAREM

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

Harodck:

thanks

the relationship built up with suki is 100 times better than what happened before the rewrite with Ty Lee, thanks!

Is there a need for the Yuri?

Why gotta add the Yuri in it? I like the harem, great job, Btw but I don't see the point of azula X Suki, I thought you would leave it as Xing X azula, Xing X Suki, Xing X Tylee, and xing x kitara?

nice, the harem is starting, usually i would feel insecure about this polyamourus harems but the fact they both Admited MC has the Biggest place in their hearts makes all of that insecurity goes away. Keep the good work bro

very interesting chapter... that's all i can say

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter bud. Definitely need another 100+ chapters to tide me over for the month. 😁

Great chapter