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The fabled magic core appears! The source of magic. The reserve! Nobody knows where it came from. Definitely not from canon
This is so genuinely childish that I love it
I have read every fanfic in Ao3(filtering is horrible there), FanFiction.Net and WebNovel on Naruto. Some I loved, others I dropped on chapter 1. I rarely rate 5 stars since most novels are shit. So I fully reserve the right to judge this novel :P This is potentially 4.7 stars and can be full 5 stars if the chapter frequency or chapter size improves. The story progresses naturally and without leaps of logic or character assassinations. No cliches like Evil Hiruzen or like. Story is good and dialogues flow very naturally. It might become my top 3 Naruto fanfic if continued. There are some typos but nothing major. The only issue might be the short chapters and update frequency. The only potential issue might be how you develop the obvious cheats because it will become very wish fulfillment if not handled properly. I won’t go into detail as it’s very early. My recommendation would be to either shift to less frequency but longer chapters or high frequency but same length chapters. I will recommend the former as it gives time for you to think better and removes the pressure of releasing brain dead chapters to fulfill your obligations of chapter. In both cases, a fixed schedule is key. It’s better to stockpile some chapters to release even if you didn’t write the next one, you could maintain the schedule
Dirty minds of the author… 😂😂
I don’t think so. In fact I think it was natural. Chakra is not specific to Naruto. Avatar has that. So does Yu Yu Hakusho. Chakra is also called Ki so add dbz. Plus it’s more abnormal to think that you reincarnated into an anime immediately and I hate that in most fanfics
It’s Hokage. Hiruzen Sarutobi turned traitor and joined Iwa because he was till not free of the paperwork
Jiraiya then asked Jiraiya to sit. Jiraiya was confused because it was the first time Jiraiya has asked him to sit. But Jiraiya was adamant
I think it is more like you can defeat anybody in a short while. It’s like, you are a level 1. 8th gate can boost you up to level 100. Now it doesn’t matter if your opponent is level 10 or level 99. You would trash them all the same
so he also has a sharingan??? you get a sharingan, you get a sharingan Everybody gets a sharingan !!!
Meanwhile, Madara be like
Didn’t she say she had yet to awaken hers?
There is no way Naruto would ever introduce himself like that especially to Kushina. He will always look at the bright side and tell him his hopes and dreams and how awesome he is instead of how sad his life was.
Hiruzen be like
Fujin is the kind of man who goes out to get some milk, tries to find the best milk in the world, and in the process get 3 super powers to go into the state of war and come back with the best milk and the best cookies all in 1 afternoon
Shunshin no Shisui or Shisui of the body flicker. Teleporter is a mistranslation