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Primordial

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  • Primordial
    Primordial15d
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    The fabled magic core appears! The source of magic. The reserve! Nobody knows where it came from. Definitely not from canon

    The magic core inside every witch or wizard acts as a reservoir for magical energy, which they use to cast spells or draw upon the ambient magical energy around them. When this reserve is depleted, they experience magical exhaustion and must rest to replenish their energy before casting more spells. Moreover, the magical channels or veins that run throughout a wizard's body are crucial for distributing magic to where it's needed for casting, whether through a wand or directly from the hands for wandless magic.
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    Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian
    Book&Literature · TalesByJaz
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  • Primordial
    Primordial1mth
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    Wow! They really went full force and made 2 of the world’s smartest politicians into a group of third rate wuxia clan leaders. Chinese docs never fail to amaze me in how they can butcher any characters of political power

    Ch 154 Chapter 154: Danzo's Conspiracy.
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    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
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  • Primordial
    Primordial1mth
    Replied to AllFather_

    It’s Chinese. Nuff said

    Ch 141 Chapter 141: The New Victim.
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    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
    Anime & Comics · Yeye_Qiu
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
    Commented

    This is so genuinely childish that I love it

    'Heh…' For some reason I felt smug about that fact... that's right, crane your neck up to look at me plebians.
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    Naruto: Subject #37
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
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    I have read every fanfic in Ao3(filtering is horrible there), FanFiction.Net and WebNovel on Naruto. Some I loved, others I dropped on chapter 1. I rarely rate 5 stars since most novels are shit. So I fully reserve the right to judge this novel :P This is potentially 4.7 stars and can be full 5 stars if the chapter frequency or chapter size improves. The story progresses naturally and without leaps of logic or character assassinations. No cliches like Evil Hiruzen or like. Story is good and dialogues flow very naturally. It might become my top 3 Naruto fanfic if continued. There are some typos but nothing major. The only issue might be the short chapters and update frequency. The only potential issue might be how you develop the obvious cheats because it will become very wish fulfillment if not handled properly. I won’t go into detail as it’s very early. My recommendation would be to either shift to less frequency but longer chapters or high frequency but same length chapters. I will recommend the former as it gives time for you to think better and removes the pressure of releasing brain dead chapters to fulfill your obligations of chapter. In both cases, a fixed schedule is key. It’s better to stockpile some chapters to release even if you didn’t write the next one, you could maintain the schedule

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    Naruto: Subject #37
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
    Commented

    Dirty minds of the author… 😂😂

    Pause.
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    Naruto: Subject #37
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
    Replied to Dominic_Zibuda

    I don’t think so. In fact I think it was natural. Chakra is not specific to Naruto. Avatar has that. So does Yu Yu Hakusho. Chakra is also called Ki so add dbz. Plus it’s more abnormal to think that you reincarnated into an anime immediately and I hate that in most fanfics

    Fiction, however, was something that I always loved and never grew tired of. The beauty in the stories made me feel like my life was a part of those characters hidden in the words I read, I was not just me, a boy stuck on a bed, rather I was a connoisseur of experiences! I ran with Naruto, sailed with Luffy and swang from building to building with Spider-Man, it made me feel like I was so much more. In retrospect, that makes me sound so fucking pretentious and weird haha, but in the situation I was in, I was weird enough, why not be happy and weird instead?
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    Naruto: Subject #37
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
    Replied to 7rox

    It’s Hokage. Hiruzen Sarutobi turned traitor and joined Iwa because he was till not free of the paperwork

    So in Land of Earth, the only one who can pose a danger to Kakashi should be the Third Hokage.
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    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
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  • Primordial
    Primordial2mth
    Commented

    Jiraiya then asked Jiraiya to sit. Jiraiya was confused because it was the first time Jiraiya has asked him to sit. But Jiraiya was adamant

    In the Hokage office, Jiraiya listened to the news from Jiraiya with a serious face.
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    Naruto : Gojo Satoru Reborn As Kakashi's Brother
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    I think it is more like you can defeat anybody in a short while. It’s like, you are a level 1. 8th gate can boost you up to level 100. Now it doesn’t matter if your opponent is level 10 or level 99. You would trash them all the same

    After all, not everyone can be like Guy who almost killed Madara who had reached the level of the Sage of Six Paths. By comparison, Might Duy, who opened the Gate of Death, was only able to kill four out of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist.
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    so he also has a sharingan??? you get a sharingan, you get a sharingan Everybody gets a sharingan !!!

    The air crackled with anticipation as the two boys locked eyes, their Sharingans activated and ready to analyze every move.
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    Naruto: Mixed Heritage
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    Meanwhile, Madara be like

    It was interesting to learn that the majority of the clans that joined Konoha did so out of request from the Uchiha clan and not the Senju Clan. This was shocking as one would have assumed with Madara's vengeful nature and Hashirama's benevolent nature, it would be the other way around.
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    Naruto: Mixed Heritage
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    Didn’t she say she had yet to awaken hers?

    Miwa used her Sharingan to read Renjiro's intentions. She swiftly activated her own ninjutsu, releasing a burst of wind from her hands to counter his attack. The two attacks collided, creating a swirling vortex that disrupted the courtyard's tranquillity.
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    Naruto: Mixed Heritage
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented
    "Hahaha!!!!" His words made everyone laugh including Kiba. 
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    There is no way Naruto would ever introduce himself like that especially to Kushina. He will always look at the bright side and tell him his hopes and dreams and how awesome he is instead of how sad his life was.

    "I was born an orphan. The world that I am from here, the people in that world hated me. Where I went, I was met with discrimination, bullying, and mental and physical Abuse. At the same time, I was also ignored like I didn't even exist. I hated being ignored. It made me feel like I didn't even exist in this world. So I started pranking everyone around me to try and get everyone's attention. At that time, I was nothing but an orphan. I did not know who my mom and dad were. People hated me because the Nine-Tails Fox was inside of me."
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    Naruto : Back to the Past
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    Hiruzen be like

    Hiruzen smiled on seeing Fujin's reaction. For once, he had let Fujin experience the emotional roller coaster that Fujin frequently put Hiruzen and Shikaku through. As he had guessed, Fujin's mood became very down. Hiruzen had dangled something Fujin wanted a lot in front of his eyes and had taken it away without any hope of Fujin getting it anytime soon.
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
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    Fujin was puzzled. He wondered, 'What's up with him? He rarely asks me to sit down. Now that I think about it, the only time I did was after Jiraiya destroyed that mine and killed several hundred Kumo ninjas. Has anything major happened recently? Was it due to my fight with Juzo and Kisame? And, why is he smiling so much?'
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented
    Fujin got up with an annoyed expression and wondered, 'Who is coming here to disturb me? I already told Naruto to take today's day off.'
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    Fujin is the kind of man who goes out to get some milk, tries to find the best milk in the world, and in the process get 3 super powers to go into the state of war and come back with the best milk and the best cookies all in 1 afternoon

    Before their shock subsided, Hiruzen added, "After killing him, he caused Hoshigaki Kisame and Hozuki Mangetsu to fight each other and retreated safely without taking any losses. According to our intel, several Kiri Hunter nins died in that fight and Kisame's status is currently unknown."
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    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
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  • Primordial
    Primordial3mth
    Commented

    Shunshin no Shisui or Shisui of the body flicker. Teleporter is a mistranslation

    There was a shinobi called Shisui Uchiha who became so powerful by combining the clone jutsu with the body-flicker jutsu, earning him the title of Shisui the Teleporter. He achieved such a feat by combining two basic jutsus.
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    Naruto: The Shinobi of Gluttony
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