Y you choose, a lot of people had voted in the main comments section since they are not using the app

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

Does it say something about my character that I did not pick up her shallowness and thought she was a decent character 💀

tldr: Swan summon I am thinking of an animal that is loyal, like a *swan*. Naruto feels like he has parallels to the ugly duckling story and how he has bloomed as a character

Very cool; it was simple enough that it is believable that Naruto himself thought about it without Naruto seeming too smart

Epic

Story feels like it was written by a five year old. Good idea, poor execution. I haven't read much so maybe it gets better but for now, I'll pass

I needs a rewrite, the story is interisting but execution is meh. It also still reads like an metal so that does not help at all. I feel like this clfic should be skipped. Even if you are despersate, it's not enjoying to read. Also, the characters' name are completely wrong.

Could you edit the future chapters and change the " - " to " , "

Can you do less pseudo yuri and give ditto a static male form

With holding chapters and not foing a mas release is a violation to my rights!! I need more

What he said...

Its what the people want. Somebody needs to ask the hard questions in life

What he said 😤😆

You're a Jamaican? I heard the hurricane was awful 😨

Lemons?

And others would say otherwise

No lemons?

Lemons?

There is another guy that did the same plot bit in fary tail but I think the problem is that the girls are too young in your story... And the cover page too