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Kono_Timoda

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda18h
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    nope, you just forgot the harem tag, once you do, just wait 馃檭

    If this was a Smut fic, it would've hit top 5 monthly in no time... says quite a lot about you 馃槥
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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda18h
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    I can't say I expected this but I expected this馃ぃ

    Harem Sect: Yes 馃椏
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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda19h
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    The "never right" charger, a charger and changing cable combo that will charge any device From zero to 100% in five seconds. but the cable needs to be in the perfect position or else it will not work. [manufacture's note] (the perfect position has not been found yet)

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda20h
    Replied to SeleneXLilith

    Aiit cool.

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda21h
    Replied to SeleneXLilith

    Can you tell me what is the authors update schedule on AO3

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda1d
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    Yeah it's because it's his first novel why I give it a low /mid rating. Don't you think higher quality works should have a higher rating? And lets be honest, how many times have you read a story that is between 4.0 and 4.6 and thought that it would be good but it turned out to be meh or trash? It takes some form of self awareness to improve, so I rate it what I think it's worth. Am I saying that this story will never turn out good? No, the author can always better themself and make a master piece but from what I have seen currently, and comparing it to other works that I think deserve 4.8 and above, that review is how good I think it is

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda2d
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    I sense a genocide coming~~ 馃檭

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda2d
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    Is this a harem/lemons story? How many love interest are there?

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda2d
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    Especially if you explain that it won't be a Pok茅mon like harem

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda2d
    Replied to Kono_Timoda

    From what I found, persons that don't like harems would stil check out a story even if there is a harem tag on it or if it has a romance tag.

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda2d
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    One thing though, if you want people opinions on whether this should be a harem or not, you should add the harem tag if you want readers that like harem to consider the story or they might skip it.

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda3d
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    Webnovel said it was too much woman, no image found

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda3d
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    Honestly the pacing feels very weird and at times feels too fast the writing style feels clunky at times and some of the fights feel short-lived and unimpactful. I would like to see more World building and more in-depth conversation. One bleach fanfiction that has better execution (IMO) is: Degeneracy in Bleach World by Slander_ It's another bleach fanfiction but the World building is slower and the pacing feels more natural.

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
    Commented

    Hey Casper

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
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    You did a great job, I guess you could make it more explicit but it was good

    Ch 24 Getting Assigned To Teams (2/2) + Kissing Hinata
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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
    Replied to Grammy

    Plus, you can't say it's improbable in regards to polygamy, plus feelings change, I think it's definitely possible to catch feelings for more than one girl. or you could have the girls chasing the guy.

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
    Replied to Kono_Timoda

    A good*

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
    Replied to Grammy

    Gosh, just let me read I good harem solo leveling story, please 馃槶馃槀

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
    Commented

    I feel scammed

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  • Kono_Timoda
    Kono_Timoda4d
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    Aye aye aye, you skipped the good stuff馃槫

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