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nope, you just forgot the harem tag, once you do, just wait 馃檭
I can't say I expected this but I expected this馃ぃ
The "never right" charger, a charger and changing cable combo that will charge any device From zero to 100% in five seconds. but the cable needs to be in the perfect position or else it will not work. [manufacture's note] (the perfect position has not been found yet)
Yeah it's because it's his first novel why I give it a low /mid rating. Don't you think higher quality works should have a higher rating? And lets be honest, how many times have you read a story that is between 4.0 and 4.6 and thought that it would be good but it turned out to be meh or trash? It takes some form of self awareness to improve, so I rate it what I think it's worth. Am I saying that this story will never turn out good? No, the author can always better themself and make a master piece but from what I have seen currently, and comparing it to other works that I think deserve 4.8 and above, that review is how good I think it is
Honestly the pacing feels very weird and at times feels too fast the writing style feels clunky at times and some of the fights feel short-lived and unimpactful. I would like to see more World building and more in-depth conversation. One bleach fanfiction that has better execution (IMO) is: Degeneracy in Bleach World by Slander_ It's another bleach fanfiction but the World building is slower and the pacing feels more natural.