Comments of chapter undefined of House Of The Dragon: Vengeance of Valyria
House Of The Dragon: Vengeance of Valyria
Divinedream
Chapter comments13
I’m really looking forward to the future of this story! I could do without so many full chapters of authors notes but either way thank you for the chapter!
I totally agree but I recommend adding your author notes ahead or after an actual chapter. Seeing your story having a chapter update obviously makes me want to instantly read the new chapter only to realize it’s all notes. I can just be a let down sometimes
Divinedream:I think author notes are very important I can tell you some explanations about what I’m doing and why I’m doing this also hear your suggestions/ votes/ ideasimage
I saw this idea on another GOT story but do you know the game "For Honor" and the heroes who compose it could you lead them to be future soldiers of the MC? Then I find that the chapters are short but it's up to you to see it always remains good. Can you expand the dialogues a little more and show the relationships in more detail or even add dialogues it will improve your story I think and increase the writing of a chapter. I think your story is good for now but it can improve so keep going and thank you for the story.
