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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV1mth
    Commented

    I gave your story a chance and enjoyed every chapter. I’m no professional but grammar and sentence structure has made reading a bit clunky at times but overall enjoyable. Looking forward to more!

    Ch 27 Chapter 25
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    Taking the place of the most insane primarch (Wh 40k)
    Video Games · Ave_Dominus_Nox
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV2mth
    Commented

    Who are you!!!!!???? Where am I!!!!?????

    {Kept you waiting again, huh?}
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    Halo: Anomaly in the Galaxy
    Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV3mth
    Commented

    It’s probably due to the slow updates making me feel like nothing is going on in the story but I would recommend picking up the story to be slightly more fast paced.

    Ch 5 5.Interesting
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    Goliath [ MHA/SL]
    Anime & Comics · MasterBoner
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV3mth
    Commented

    I don’t even know who the mc is anymore if there even is one now. Way to many povs way too often.

    Ch 121 [INTERLUDE]The Großadmiral's son
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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV3mth
    Commented

    Looking forward to reading more! I’m interested in seeing how things will play out in the future.

    Ch 3 3.Ugh...
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    Goliath [ MHA/SL]
    Anime & Comics · MasterBoner
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV4mth
    Commented

    +1

    Option 1 - Only Riveria!
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    Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!
    Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV5mth
    Commented

    Good stuff. Need more though!

    Ch 9 Sons and Nephews on the Horizon
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    Warhammer Lost Primarch: The 2nd Knight
    Anime & Comics · ForestOfDarkness
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV5mth
    Commented

    Love 40k and I enjoyed reading your other stories so I’m definitely looking forward to this!!

    Ch 3 Big Appetite
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    Warhammer Lost Primarch: The 2nd Knight
    Anime & Comics · ForestOfDarkness
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV5mth
    Commented

    No

    (NO WAIFU)
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    Evil Degenerate Reborn In Vikings
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV6mth
    Commented

    Yes

    Now im not saying this is going to end anytime soon, between clone wars, episode 3 rebels, books original trilogy, I have more than enough to keep this going for a long while but I was thinking when this ends, God already told Gavin that the world between worlds connects to other places, would it be interesting for him to journey to worlds like Mass Effect, Halo, Warhammer 40k or others. Just a thought I was kicking around
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    Reborn into Star Wars without a system
    Movies · Wingzer0
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV6mth
    Commented

    +1

    Option A: Star Wars- MC will be a clone (Of course not in the traditional Jango Fett way) created on Kamino well before the clone wars. I want to change some things with the force so be prepared for that, and I want this Mc to share a lot in common with Alpha. 
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    Halo: Anomaly in the Galaxy
    Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV6mth
    Commented

    Very unfortunate but thank you for your work.

    Ch 70 Please Read
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    Bleach: From You to Me
    Anime & Comics · AKD_Khmer
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    The story so far is different but enjoyable. It has a little flavor from both universes which I like. I’m definitely looking forward to more! Thank you!

    Ch 8 Chapter IV
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    Son of Sanguine: Corvinius
    Anime & Comics · Corum_4752
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    We do not see the mc much anymore. So many pov or interludes.

    Ch 100 [interlude]The company arrives
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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
    TV · Chill_ean_GUY
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    I’m really looking forward to where you’re going to take the story! Thank you!

    Ch 14 Battle
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    Destiny: Hive Rising
    Video Games · Blankkk_
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    Really looking forward to where you go with this story!

    Ch 12 The Choran Gland
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    The First Soul (40k)
    Video Games · Matheu_DeWitt
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Replied to Divinedream

    I totally agree but I recommend adding your author notes ahead or after an actual chapter. Seeing your story having a chapter update obviously makes me want to instantly read the new chapter only to realize it’s all notes. I can just be a let down sometimes

    Ch 17 IMPORTANT
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    House Of The Dragon: Vengeance of Valyria
    Book&Literature · Divinedream
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    I’m really looking forward to the future of this story! I could do without so many full chapters of authors notes but either way thank you for the chapter!

    Ch 17 IMPORTANT
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    House Of The Dragon: Vengeance of Valyria
    Book&Literature · Divinedream
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV7mth
    Commented

    Really looking forward to more!! Thanks for the story!

    Ch 12 End of The Battle of Geonosis
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    Star Wars: General
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  • GenericKaneIV
    GenericKaneIV8mth
    Commented

    I love warhammer so I’m glad to see you start this. Thank you!

    Ch 90 Chapter 90: Side Story 4.1 - You Call Yourself Mortarion?!
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    Warhammer 40K: I Don’t Want to Be a Tin Can!
    Book&Literature · Read_and_Chill
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