theratking88
the world new order made slaves out of us all .
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hopefully the cringe will stop in future chapters
cringe rewrite please
please continue this novel
cringe
you're right this novel is lame
why did he pass out ? no guard is around ?
just have pirates raid the castle and take the island happens all the time
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so is he gonna rule the island?
the last chapter
rewrite it's cringe
rewrite mc is been an arshole
just a bit of magic and the island will be safe but no doesn't matter
so he just left the people to be inslaved again ? rewrie this chapter
make the island a fortress high stone walls at the edges
you can shape molten stone and steel
bad story and cringe
can they survive in the island ?
this is getting boring