Comments of chapter undefined of The Ashen Keeper (Marvel x Dark Souls x Bloodborne)

I don't know, I just know that I love Ultron and I would like him to stay alive

The interaction is good, but the narrative feels a little choppy. There is a lack of smoother transitions between important events and dialogues.

Honestly, I found the dialogue between MC and the psychopathic robot to be complete nonsense - it sounds like those scary speeches given by hippies and environmentalists who believe that humans are evil in the world. And I also hate it when they criticize the heroes, in this case the Avengers, who do everything to save the world, even going as far as sacrificing their own lives.

thank you for the chapter

Great chapter

Thanks for the chapter

TFTC

Thanks for the chap! ✨

Tftc