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The author may have found writing this chapter exciting, but unfortunately I found it boring. I like the mc and his personality so far, but I was hoping this would turn into a martial arts fanfic. I don't like this development. I just have one question: will the focus of the fanfic be martial arts?
The story was cool so far, but everything was ruined with his idea of leaving Rias' nobility. The DxD universe revolves around Rias and her nobility, taking the mc out of that part is a big mistake that many authors make.
Honestly, I found the dialogue between MC and the psychopathic robot to be complete nonsense - it sounds like those scary speeches given by hippies and environmentalists who believe that humans are evil in the world. And I also hate it when they criticize the heroes, in this case the Avengers, who do everything to save the world, even going as far as sacrificing their own lives.
I like the character Elicia, but her and the other MC's fights were boring - I prefer flashy fights with explosions. The magic of the two mcs are not interesting, and I can see that the fights later on will continue to be uninteresting if they continue with this strategic fighting style - such fights would be cool if this were an anime, but being written it becomes boring.
I'm disappointed in the mc's arrogant attitude and in the author who made the jedi idiots and child abductors - perhaps the author is unaware of the history of the jedi or simply hates them. please tag mc villain, since he is not on the side of good.
The first few chapters were good, but then the mc became a manipulator, spoiling the story for me. Honestly, what he did to Princess Snow in this chapter was unnecessary and meaningless. I don't even know if I'm going to continue reading this story since the mc's personality is manipulative garbage. Please tag villain or manipulative mc so as not to mislead readers like me who don't like this type of mc.
The first few chapters were good, but then the mc became a manipulator, spoiling the story for me. Honestly, what he did to Princess Snow in this chapter was unnecessary and meaningless. I don't even know if I'm going to continue reading this story since the mc's personality is manipulative garbage. Please tag villain or manipulative mc so as not to mislead readers like me who don't like this type of mc.
I don't like this Issei personality. He is very arrogant and cold, when compared to Jaune Arc from the author's other fanfic. I like Jaune Arc's personality that would help people without that selfish mentality of the current mc.