Cedric_7512
Eh honestely it felt indeed a bit forced but you already mentioned that you weren't good/experienced in writing romance, and I am fairly certain I would have made it feel even more forced than you so. Doesn't take away that it is an enjoyable read, so my advice is take the week to take a break and after that just ignore them. As a character I read about once said 'you are walking on a road and a dog barks at you, will you bark back at it?' (Crossedge: [Bune Farmer] Random Snippets Thread Questionable Questing Ch2)
Man, this novel is amazing and the story works well even with the protagonist being basically omnipotent (This in itself is an amazing thing. 99.9% of novels whose heroes are all-powerful fail spectacularly) The idea of the underworld is amazing in all possible simplicity, although I remember reading it in another novel, but your implementation was prime one Oh yes, sorry for the long post But I think I should show you my support when we need it Google translate I am sorry again😅
Didn't he also fall in love with that Grifindor girl? Also in hope you can find your motivation for writing again and don't get too discouraged by these comments because the fact that they are complaining because you wrote one bad chapter shows how good the others are and how high they'r expectations are because of that
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In the future can you write different POVs like in your Toji fic? Like for example Gojo Satoru's feelings, what happened to him after HADESSUUU left then greek god's reaction maybe then maybe the dragons' reactions towards veldora disappearing then maybe POV on Yamamoto of commenting how hard/easy/grateful he is. Write something about Ichibe POV on central 46 messing with HADESSUUU. Finally slice of life chapters with senjumaru