Is it the fhaggot that wished to marry Daenerys? Aiming high just like this slave lol

Like 4 or 5, can’t remember the exact number. Tbh, I never saw a PJO fic where they get put down aside from yours, they either simp for them like a bunch of degenerates with degradation kink or just forgive them by being ‘understanding’ or some shi. Anyways, I’d like to thank you for going this route. The amount of times they made me livid is crazy and it almost made me decide to stop reading PJO fics for good.

FINALLY A FIC WHERE THESE BWCHS GET PUT DOWN LIKE THE RABID DOGS THEY ARE CHAIN THIS BWCH AND HAVE HER CARRY IT N*KED FOR OTHERS TO SEE

Does that mean he’ll settle with this hoe when they meet up for the first time and patch things up after she already shamed him by being a sl*t? bruh get another fl 😐

Why is he rushing things? The long night is centuries away. He should amass his army and break the wildlings into submission, it’ll take time to make them submit, time that he has. He should look beyond the wall after soldifying his position and solving issues in his father’s home. Am I missing something here?

Come now streek…. You seem to love streaking around n*k*d because that’s what I see rn with you laying your whole personality bare. Try to dress that personality with some actual swagger and work on your comprehension skills. You come here prancing around dressed in a clown suit n giving out a unoriginal insult that only a middle schooler angsty child would say and then not expect someone to respond to you in a response that befits a child like yourself? Like calm down lil bro, if you’re going to act like a man child then you’ll receive responses that befits you. If a child talks shzmt then throw his own words back at him, you think you’re worth the effort? LOL

Says the unoriginal comedian man child that gets surprised when he receives a retort that begets his status.

The little goblin is lost for words, I see

Your mother made the mistake of giving birth to you. You should hang yourself to recitfy her mistake.

Good. That guy is such a disgrace he could not do his duty and pop out some children with Rhaenyra.

I know one where the MC is the son of Hades with shadow of monarch powers, he and his friends get stalked by Artemis and her group of man hating savages and when they meet face to face, one of her man hating bwches named Zoe starts a fight talking smack and when the MC fights back, Atremis forces him to apologize acting as if she was his mother and the bigger person lol They try to recruit the girls with him too (It’s why they stalked him in the first place) In the end both of them (Artemis and Zoe) are confirmed harem members 🤢 Imagine being stalked and insulted then forced to apologize for acting aggressive towards them after being subjected to that 💀

I’ll leave this here since the author deleted it

I went through all the chapters dumbfounded and speechless, what type of wish fullfillment fowkry is this?

That’s some next level delulu my guy, you should print a copy of this sh*tty chapter and shove it back up your ahh. Stop sh*tting garbage plots please.

My review was a good 4 stars rating man, did you want a one star instead or was the criticism too much for you?💀

Good fic but the comedic aspect of it is what makes this fic disappointing with the MC being submissive when it comes to Sola alongside his disgusting inner monologue with all his ‘gooning’ charade. He seems OP in the force so that’s a plus but he needs to work out on his battle IQ. I can go on but I’ll leave it at that, read it if you don’t mind cringe comedy.

Why is this r*t*rd going around in circles instead of being straightforward and telling her who they really are to him? Is he fond of creating misunderstandings and annoying issues for himself?

WN keeps shadowbanning my reply smh

You can’t be serious, that’s such a disgusting plot line you might as well make a new story after you’re done with this world. Imagine forgetting the girl and experiences he had in his first world to never be mentioned again after the arc is done, what was the point of all that? It doesn’t make any sense, it can’t even be called a multiverse journey💀 Please tell me you plan to scrape this disgusting idea. What you plan in doing is create new fics in one book.