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While I wont say I am not disappointed at 3 chaps a week, I get it. I prefer you to not run yourself ragged. So take it easy take a breath, and do it at a pace you are comfortable with.
Ehm editing issue?
you mentioned he was a top ten fortune 500 company. his current net worth doesnt fit that description.
Because he want to devour all the magical energy of the world, not just the cursed energy that cursed spirits use.
Yeah but from what? His mother is my guess.
you have not before justice, so the sentence doesnt work.
Great story, I do like the interactions with Cooler, he always seemed like the 'cooler' Frost demon. I do hope to see a universe jump to 6 or the DBS 7 Canon. I am wondering however if he will attain super saiyan 4, its honestly my favorite transformation. The Super Sayain God is just that, it pushes the saiyan into godhood, the super saiyan 4 drags out every bit of potential and true form that they have.
isnt it secund etappe or whatever for bankai and resurrecion for shikai?
Ehm not sure what you are doing in this paragraph because it reads extremely weird because of the CapiTaliZaTion
the count on those exercises is a bit high mate. Assuming your using the average stat in the stat window no way he is gonna make it.
he meant that the sentence doesnt make sense if in the current format and that it should be younger.
a misspelling in platinum badge
Thats extremely high, some of the s Rank missions go for 1-10 million. Not certain whether that would be even close to worth
That isnt crush, that is choke. Both are telekinetic abilities.
Kree?
Wonder how you gonna incoporate this line in the story. Sudden extreme amount of knowledge? Gonna try and recreate the erskine (marvel) formula and combine it with other soldier serums?
pre civil war, i'd agree after not so much.