Comments of chapter undefined of Marvelous Twist

This mc seems a little stupid to me, he's reminding me of Chinese protagonists.

A nice start to the fic

Harem/polygamy or non-harem/monogamy? I don't read harem/polygamy so I need to know

it's looking nice. While i would've liked to see the mc's past, you will most likely do that through flashbacks and monologues. Perhaps the first chapter was a flashforward and from now on, you're planning to tell the story from his transmigration. the crystals are also a nice way to gain powersninstead of something like a system or a freely given superpower. This way he had to actually be smart about it, think of the possibilities and plan out the events etc.

How does Extremis compare to the Super Soldier Serum strenght-wise?

good start keep it goin. Are you gonna add some more romance to this one

is this AI generated? did chat gdp wrote the fanfic? this is so mundane and common that looks like it was made by an AI

Good

Good chapter, will this be a harem? I really hope it wont.

Thanks

Thxs for the chap

what kind of idiot would give up extremis whining about a threat to their life. as for shepards reward... well we dont yet know what his plans are but personally i wouldve asked for a job as their advisor. imagne what stark industries could do with an outside common sense view. well written, look forward to more

Keep going please 🤩

SAUCY

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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