The_Bored_Immortal
Way too bored to be alive, way too bored to kill myself, way too bored to care for grammar. Beta Reader/Editor Email: immortaleditorial@gmail.com For details, shoot me an email!
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The_Bored_Immortal1dReplied to BharthukeW Image
Allen didn't know how to react to the fact that monsters like Hellboy and Spawn are immune to many poisons and toxins but not to all, while a waifu is immune to all poisons...- The_Bored_Immortal2dReplied to Mew_you
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Photo of Yami Uchiha - The_Bored_Immortal4dReplied to Mew_you
Eh overly chunni maybe, but not that awful
Photo of Yami Uchiha - The_Bored_Immortal7dReplied to bearburrable
Would be an interesting concept lol
The Spilled Coffee. - The_Bored_Immortal27dReplied to La_Atlantis
They're Serafell and Yasaka, I honestly adore their dynamic. Even though the idea of romance is introduced relatively late in the fic I find that it's integrated very well into the story. I highly recommend this book though I would prefer you read it on the original site(or app) fanfiction.net under the same name
- The_Bored_Immortal1mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Honestly it's only good if you're looking for a complete power fantasy and not much else. If you're looking for something that will flesh out the characters and engage you in the story, try something else.
If anyone tries to screw with us. We will burn them alive. Diodora's dead if he even comes anywhere close to her. - The_Bored_Immortal1mthReplied to VOID_321
Grammar is kinda trash, the cannon gets derailed to the extreme from what I remember. It's at least worth a read in my opinion
Sai, an 18-year old, only child of the family, living in Bengaluru, India. He had just come out of the movie theater with his friends after watching the latest Marvel movie Eternals. Before he had gone for the movie he was excited because of the fact that after a long time, he watched MCU movie and as an avid MCU fan he loved it. Despite that, after watching it he felt that the movie needed a more emotional aspect yet he didn't have any prejudice against the story being an origin movie. Marvel hasn't produced any good origin movies recently except for Shang-Chi which was debatable. Eternals could have been a good one, but it needed more depth. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to lvl30dragon
For all intents and purposes, in this situation at least, it doesn't matter at all how I refer to it. Of course I know the difference between weight and mass, but my point still stood regardless. My worry was addressed in like the next paragraph anyway,
She activated it, causing energy to appear from one flat surface of the cylinder, forming a sword in an instant. The sword was around a metre in length and had a breadth of three centimetres. She lightly swung it once, saying, "The primary advantage of this is that there is no weight to these weapons. So, you can wield them without any muscle strain for longer durations than wielding a conventional weapon." - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to The_Bored_Immortal
May I add, Κύριε ελέησον Κύριε ελέησον ο παπάς τρελάθηκε και παίζει πλεϊστέσιον
"Kyrie Eleison." With that, the demon breaks into pieces, and his body melts into pure negative energy that is then absorbed by the shattered black key shards, which then disappear from sight. The energy then disperses as I take a breath and see the rest of the cultists staring at me in awe, to which I go over to them and place my hand on one of their shoulders. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
*the fenix->the Phoenix
Even the power of Marco [The Fenix] was shown to have limits in his regeneration in the Onigashima war! - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to ALEX1402
That's exactly what this paragraph is saying
In Marvel, there is also a Hercules and an Ares, but compared to Marvel's, DC's are more despicable. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
It's not really a problem, but I do find portraying actual, living people fairly weird. Especially if that portrayal is in a negative or demeaning light
(A/N: Megan Fox is young in this universe, she's in her twenties at this moment.) - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
I realised the error of my ways lol ┐(´ー｀)┌
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
Yeah, you're probably right. But I believe we don't need to scientifically analyse One Piece of all things lol
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Yippee
On The Run - The_Bored_Immortal2mthCommented
Aight...this threw me for a loop lol. Didn't expect to see a greek name here, and what a name it is
Avalanche, whose real name is Dominikos Ioannis Petrakis, is one of the most committed to Magneto's cause for the good of all mutants. His mutant ability allows him to generate and control seismic waves, as well as manipulate the earth and rocks around him. He uses these abilities to cause earthquakes and destruction, becoming a formidable force on the battlefield. - The_Bored_Immortal2mthReplied to MrLemure
That wouldn't be the case though, to travel at the speed of light he would have to completely turn into photons, particles without mass. So him moving at that speed wouldn't affect his surroundings
[Blue Grade Ability: Tenth of Kizaru's speed] - The_Bored_Immortal3mthCommented
Eh, it can be good if done correctly. Often there is a need to pre-establish a character without jumping directly to action or an exposition dialogue, a backstory is a good way to do that
This story is similar in that regard, but unlike other stories, it doesn't give a shit about the life the soul had before it died. Not even the particular way the soul died is important because who cares about that when he could have another chance at life?