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The Undying Star

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Shiho3
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Ismlrb04
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I enjoyed reading the first chapter

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Ateeb_Ahmed_6204
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great,the first chapter was very good

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_Haven
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Even if you don’t have faith in your writing skills, Author, that doesn’t mean your storytelling ability is weak! I very much enjoyed this first chapter, and understood it well. Keep working hard, and you’ll continue to improve. I’m rooting for you!

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Ditin
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i caught up with the first novel so here j am 😆 will watch his career with great intrest😌✨️

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
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This is a pretty good chapter so far. I'll see what this novel offers in the next chapters.

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Hdsh_aa
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You wrote so great!

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Ismlrb04
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Shiho3
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Shiho3
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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Noob6_writer9
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I enjoyed reading it bro

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ikigai_yugen
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Pretty good first chapter!

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Tifala
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Beautiful chapter. But why only hair color?

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