Greetings reader. As the author of the novel, I am grateful to everyone who reads it (I hope you like it). Let's move straight to the good stuff, the first volume has been completed and will slowly be published 1-2 chapters a day at 00:05 site time. I apologize for disappearing from time to time and not publishing new chapters, but sometimes I need to think about where the plot is going and who to add to this or that arc..

Your writing has improved exponentially! keep it up

Yes, this is analogous to a student

No, I mean finish the trip to the capital Avelei

Will be soon:)

I won't spoil it :) But I don't plan to make all the girls fall in love with MCs or something like that.

In the Cray Empire, everything is put on the power of magic or the sword. And the main character at the beginning is not a master of the sword and did not even strive for this, unlike his father. :)

Yes he has white hair typo thanks:)

What can highlight a good transfer of thoughts. But the problem is that the chapters are as short as possible (I see this for the first time). Even if it's a story. What was written below about 3k and 4k words in a chapter so few write. Basically, write 2k and 1.5k per chapter. You need at least 1k in each chapter and add plot directly to that story.

A good novel, an easy-to-read interesting world, excellent descriptions of both dialogues and descriptions of what surrounds the characters. And above all, the change in the worldview of the protagonist from his fears to aspirations becomes stronger. The novel harmonizes well with the system.

Oh, you young cheater

An interesting idea, but as for me, everything happens too quickly from the appearance of Amalia and beyond. I would like to know more about how magic and peace appeared in the world. There are a good number of chapters.

It seems to me or too rapid development?

Doesn't he have magical talent?

A very beautiful novel, from the construction of dialogues to the thoughts of the protagonist and descriptions of places. This is probably the first novel that describes this time, it is interesting to read and you want to know what will happen next. If you like alternate history you will love this novel.

A good novel, easy to read interesting plot plot, voluminous chapters. But for some reason there is no description of the characters. I hope the author continues to update the novel.

It is not necessary to repeat the name, you could indicate it in some other way

What could be more fun than kicking huh?

Beautiful chapter. But why only hair color?

Well-constructed dialogues, the plot captures from the first chapter, a beautiful description of both the places and the clothes of the characters. But there are dialogues that do not display who is speaking to whom and with what intonation, and this knocks the reading out of the process. If you like a beautiful and elaborate plot, you will love this novel.