See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Glad you liked it >.<

An awesome book with an interesting first few chapters and pretty good storyline! There's always room for improvement so I'm sure it'll get more better as the chapters increase further on ^.^

All the best 🥳🥳

She's hesitant and overthinks people's motives? I wonder why.

Oh... kay... Plot twist of the year 😂

Hmm... interesting...

Oh? A demon who trapped her mother and is now trapping her? Just a guess 🤣

Pretty intriguing first chapter >.<

Hm? So her mother is... a demon? Or a ghost?

It's more readable if you divide big paragraphs into two 😅

Wonder what happened to her to make people look at her with pity...

Um... which part do you find confusing 😀 Maybe I could clarify?

Thanks ^.^

Glad you liked it >.<

The storyline seems pretty interesting and Ian feels like a intriguing main character! Can't wait to read further on and see how the story progresses on further ^.^ Great job Author >.<

.... Well... yeah... that's.... a better name for all that... I think...🤣

Pretty good first chapter!

Cool!