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Beautiful chapter. But why only hair color?
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I enjoyed reading the first chapter
great,the first chapter was very good
Even if you don’t have faith in your writing skills, Author, that doesn’t mean your storytelling ability is weak! I very much enjoyed this first chapter, and understood it well. Keep working hard, and you’ll continue to improve. I’m rooting for you!
i caught up with the first novel so here j am 😆 will watch his career with great intrest😌✨️
This is a pretty good chapter so far. I'll see what this novel offers in the next chapters.
You wrote so great!
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I enjoyed reading it bro
Pretty good first chapter!