Comments of chapter undefined of A life with the Author
A life with the Author
Emmanuel_Capricorn
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I have one phrase to say "I hate you". Though the story is great so yeah it's kind of balanced. Keep it up. Not many can handle things like this. But yeah. And in the part that I hated is your sadistic nature. I don't mind the NTR part if you didn't say something that this won't happen. NTR doesn't mean just to have s*x it means that your partner is enjoying someone else touch and the like. It's NTR already. If you have emphasize that SHE DIDN'T ENJOY IT then it won't count since it's considered r*ped but if she enjoyed it then yeah. It's NTR so put the NTR TAG ON YOUR STORY YOU SADISTIC FIEND. ALSO DELETE THAT NOTE YOU'VE PUT IN THE EARLY CHAPTERS. Hayst the story is great though. Keep it up. I just hate NTR so yeah sorry for the outburst. Hopefully it won't happen in the later part of the story. And if you want my opinion on the girl. Just let her be maid to the MC or directly shoo her away on the story like she's ashamed enough not to face mc and the like so she went away. Not before you give her a big slap on the face though(not literally). I mean just let her be a stalker and let her see how happy the new FL in your story with the MC. So it would satisfy the readers. So yeah thanks for the chapter.
You don't really need her character in the story anymore. She'll only serve as a point of gratification at this point.Don't be that guy who only cares about sexual gratification. No matter she loves the mc, she already betrayed him. Cut all ties. Leave her there.Make the mc a silent type for a few chapters and patch things up with his mother. He can beef up his houses protection since similar things might happen to his beautiful mother.The mc is rational but he needs a little more ambition on him.I suggest making him protect a character from Komi can't communicate from thugs thereby making him realize that the school he is going to will have all kinds of trouble.Make him strive more before going to high school. Make him stronger, smarter, and more ambitious, ambitious enough to control the lives of low lives like the blond haired guy with no consequences.With his infinite talent, he can create technological advances like an Ironman Suit or a Gundam.Heck he can even create a portal gun in due time and travel the multiverse.Every technological marvel in fiction is popular because the theory is already plausible, we only lacked application.Application he can obtain with his infinite talent.Plus after realizing he is also in Komi can't communicate, he'll be able to trust again since he knows the characters there. The only thing he has to worry about is the protection of his future friends.No matter how sad or skittish he becomes because of that experience, he's also very rational and practical.He'll get over it and use his experience and realize that he doesn't need to conform to social norms. He needs to protect his family and (future) friends even if he has to kill future problems in the area.
how about a regret arc script mc fully move let say 5 month's or weeks maybe while he's on moving on phase lets slide in a new fmc let her start as a friend etc then they develop felling too each other then after while becoming a couple let bring the old fmc let's say that she want him back but to just see him happy with other woman let her become desperate
I think MC should make her a slave or maid and let her watch how much he loves other FM. And Mc is also at fault for letting this escalate to this while he can stop them at the beginning. So don't just play the victim. Give her the 'D' which she wanted, but don't give her love or anything. Just see what will happen in the future. This is the best solution (or you will be just letting her suffer for the plot's convenience which you can prevent from happening at the beginning). Note: this is my personal opinion.
