You know author I don't really hate it when you're doing this things like posting the chapter that you can only read at your patreon. However it would conflict with the interest of some of your readers. I don't know your intention with this but if what you want is money then it is just fine. However if you want it to be on top and receive more stones or anything it would be great if you don't do this. Many of your readers won't last long with this type of writings. I don't have any problem with your works since it is yours. It is great, the writings are good. There are only some problems but it can be discarded. Well if you're aiming for money for this then your way of writing this story is okay I guess.

On second thought maybe just maybe you could add her. Hehe not a simp but if you follow her story line she should love yuito though even though she knows what she have done. Well yeah like that on guy said in the comment(I can't really see the name while typing) it is your story so you can do whatever you want with her. If she does have any significance in the story then one way or another she will have a certain place in Yuito's heart if you know what I mean. And you will inevitably add her on the harem one way or another or you will face all your readers when the time comes. Portaying her like this will gain sympathy to anyone who will read it no matter their past is. Well not all but mostly especially those weaker ones. So yeah thabks for the chap. It's been a while since I read it since I don't want to be hanged in the cliff you always do.

Hello Author!! I was kinda taken a back on what you said in the previous chapter. I was supporting you as long as I can remember however it was only a few weeks ago that I learned how to vote using power stones. I did vote all my free stones on this fics so I hope you won't drop this. It is a fascinating story for me. The story has everything I like inside a storyline. I'm not really fan of struggles and unknown variables maybe that's why. The story so far is quite good I don't really think of a problem unless one find it boring then it's there problem. Everyone has there own taste so I can't really find trouble with them. Anyways your book is one of the books I have been waiting to update every single day just to read it. Well anyways good job and stay strong maybe it would take 1st place in the power ranking. Good luck.

None actually. Mostly are in hiatus.

I'm a fan of this author so you won't really be disappointed in his/her updates. From his/her latest works the latest chapter is 36 so and the longest is 120+. So yeah. And just don't let this author down because of your sarcasm not everyone is the same.

By the way can you add Shiina Mahiru on the FL. Just a suggestion. Since you are on the normal world route she would be a great find. Though I still don't trust you. Just don't say something that would greatly affect the readers viewpoint on the story. Cause you yourself said that and you still write it. It's very original and exciting but not everyone can enjoy something like that. Your story is great but some mishaps can make you lose some of potential followers. So yeah keep up the good work. I still didn't read your previous stories but if this story can develop nicely then I'll try to read your previous ones. Thank you for your hardwork as well.

I have one phrase to say "I hate you". Though the story is great so yeah it's kind of balanced. Keep it up. Not many can handle things like this. But yeah. And in the part that I hated is your sadistic nature. I don't mind the NTR part if you didn't say something that this won't happen. NTR doesn't mean just to have s*x it means that your partner is enjoying someone else touch and the like. It's NTR already. If you have emphasize that SHE DIDN'T ENJOY IT then it won't count since it's considered r*ped but if she enjoyed it then yeah. It's NTR so put the NTR TAG ON YOUR STORY YOU SADISTIC FIEND. ALSO DELETE THAT NOTE YOU'VE PUT IN THE EARLY CHAPTERS. Hayst the story is great though. Keep it up. I just hate NTR so yeah sorry for the outburst. Hopefully it won't happen in the later part of the story. And if you want my opinion on the girl. Just let her be maid to the MC or directly shoo her away on the story like she's ashamed enough not to face mc and the like so she went away. Not before you give her a big slap on the face though(not literally). I mean just let her be a stalker and let her see how happy the new FL in your story with the MC. So it would satisfy the readers. So yeah thanks for the chapter.

I don't like to comment much but with the development of the story yeah it was the worst story I have read. The Author is One Sadistic Alien. Be mindful the story is great though except his notes that will f*ck you up in the later parts of the story. So don't read it.

First Girlfriend Cuckled him So Yeah Goodluck MC.

Yeah it has NTR so yeah the Author is one Sadistic Alien.

Here's the thing. First PUT A NTR TAG TO YOUR STORY YOU F*CK*NG AUTHOR. It gives a warning to those who don't want it. Also ERASE THAT B*LLSH*T YOU'VE NOTED IF YOU ARE JUST GOING TO F*CK UP THE STORY. If you are one of those SADISTIC Author then GO F*CK YOUR OWN MOM YOU F*CK*NG M*TH*RF*CK*R. Also for those reader out there beware of this Author if you don't like ntr then this is not for you.

I thought there are no tragic scenes?? What about this??

My opinions lies on your well being. It's what you want or fits you matters the most cause you are the author. Its a great story by the way. Hope you won't drop it anytime soon. But if you want my opinion. It should be 7 chapters on saturday. It is more satisfactory than reading a chapter a day.

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Why didn't it have a tragic tag if your character development cause it?? Genius main character?? Why didn't you just put terrible and coward. If the main character is a "GENIUS" why didn't he do anything about his situation. You only put the tag just for others to read your story although its false. Please be a good writer. It would only make you bad if you are going to continue with your work.

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Well you're promoting this fanfic of yours but does it deserve the things you want to acquire. Like have you even written this wholeheartedly?? The chapter are small and slow update?? Are kidding me??

By the way where is the golden lottery ticket that he won on his first mission??

Well one thing I say. I want not to take it as an insult but know or change something about the story. Can you change it so that the mc did have a small talent boost not godly since he is still a retard afterwards and dont give him an admin perks its kind of insulting since all he has is looks not brain. If you want the story to be harem just erase the admin perks on the system cause thaths wholesome b*llsh*t .