Great chapter! The imagination and idea are there and the story is building on itself gradually. The grammar and vocabulary could use a little work but nothing major. Keep going, author!
I've read alot of novels but this one is really interesting I'm a fantasy lover but this novel of transmigration is really interesting đ„° it has also made me feel like I'm the one available in the story its really captivating
This is interesting, If you read a lot of fl lead mc you definitely enjoy reading this.I read quite a lot webtoon with female mc that entered the book they once read and the story is fun to read for me. I'll slowly dive in and left my trace as I progress in the story.
