BlueJeans
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Truck-kun always making trouble
I feel the same here.
This is interesting
what kind of beast would appear?
The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.
This thing is making me confused. Just what happened. I can't even tell which is reality and which is not.
Is this a time skip perhaps?
I think description like this could ve been simplyfied.
You should at least try to run. Don't wait the truck and hug it.
Does the Helicopter just crushed on them?
I really like this type of game. I played many like Civ series, Rise of Nations and more.