Palpable_Banana
Didn’t like this chapter.. too much nerfing.. with current abilities.. he shouldn’t have any problem dealing with those 2.. also forcing the plot with losing an arm and his teammates, really!?..
You shouldn’t have made him so strong if you want higher stakes, because now it’s just annoying af to read a blatant nerf. The fights aren’t exciting when you know the mc should easily win. His flames are way too hot for the threads to do anything other than burn. If doesn’t matter if they’re coated in earth chakra, it’s the hottest flames in existence. Plus his flash step is basically either on par or just below Hirashin, kakazu gets speed blitzed easily. Too many Oc’s and inconsistent power scaling killed this fic for me.