Honestly I feel like I have read this somewhere. Especially the mc name. Having doubts it's actually original even more with how lazy author was with just copy and paste wiki information for powers non stop

Man pathetic af. Just copying and paste wiki Info non stop and act8ng l8ke you actually writing someone. Worthless man.

Yeah stolen work. Harry potter lost son is name of it on here. The 22 chapters here equal maybe 3 chapter of original..author stretching this one out to milk content that isn't even his. Pathetic af

So 80% chapter is filler monologue/ mini info dump. Pretty worthless till end lol

Just a random throw in there you could add raven from teen titans but adult version. Would fit I think

Trying be into it. Starwars and GOT just don't mix for me.hoping I enjoy it

Should give him some red in his hair for his mother's side of family

Other than chapters being too short it's good

Became trash so fast with this. Author doesn't know what type of Mc he wants. Mc isn't even Jacob or anything anymore. What's point of reincarnation when his actual mind and self is gone. Waste of time

Idk if author deletes all bad reviews or low ones to forces 5 stars constantly or what bit it's no where close to this 5 star story. Story isn't anything special. 18 chapters in a months times is kinda low especially since alot chapters short or just not important. The Mc and female Mc only thing really unique. For chapter 18 seems author forcing plot and killing off aemma like canon. So what's point of fanfic when all that different is just Mc lol the mc only reason this story even decent but it's kinda falling short further it goes now. Same as most other GOT stories so far.

So all story was worthless at start now and Mc just hides under illusion nonstop now. Boring af now

Author is just m8lking chapters because 100% I read this on here before and it was way further ahead and nothing has changed that I noticed. So these basic af uploads is them just doing easy lazy work

Does he get all his memories of that life there. It seemed like he didn't

And cliche af ok lol

Maybe learn to add space between paragraphs. Some actual.effort would be nice lol

So you decide to end it with a cliff hanger. Man black list this author for life

Getting boring with how stretch out everything happens. Plus old lady behavior was cliche af and boring

So forcing this drama of h The news of him being evil and he does nothing to stop or fight it. Pathetic writing to be this cliche and make Mc dumb af right now

So villain now. Boring af and very very cliche..whole story turned shyt real fast with forced drama of parents and shyt..now this. author is garbage

Filler tbh just to stall progression. Little side stories taking up whole thing