Palpable_Banana
I love this fanfic, but I think he should not have this much difficulty with Kakuzu... I mean how can the flames of Yamamoto not burn Kakuzu's threads... And how will he recover the arm he lost???
His flames did burn through kakuzu’s threads, just not fast enough to stop them from hitting him. I didn’t make it really clear but I made the assumption that having an earth affinity would make him more resistant to the flames. I tried to convey that he bunches up a the threads for quantity over quality to slow down the burning effects of the flames. Condsidering that the threads are a powerful forbidden technique, I assumed they would be rather durable as well. Don’t know if that makes sense but those are my reasons
You shouldn’t have made him so strong if you want higher stakes, because now it’s just annoying af to read a blatant nerf. The fights aren’t exciting when you know the mc should easily win. His flames are way too hot for the threads to do anything other than burn. If doesn’t matter if they’re coated in earth chakra, it’s the hottest flames in existence. Plus his flash step is basically either on par or just below Hirashin, kakazu gets speed blitzed easily. Too many Oc’s and inconsistent power scaling killed this fic for me.